Dream Animals

The Ginbis Dream Animals biscuits are a long-selling, very well known, animal shaped biscuit in Japan (hyphens not required for the latter two unless you wish to verbally emphasize). It's time to learn some vocabularies for animals in English (this sentence can be understood a little bit but it should be more along the lines of "You can increase your English vocabulary by reading the animal names" or "You can learn new words by reading the animal names in English"). Even though some of the biscuits make it hard to recognize what animals they are due to their shapes, there is no problem because they have their names printed on them. They are all crunchy and have a sweet butter taste. They are very easy to be friends with. Biscuits make good friends. 

Nice writing! Your paragraph is completely understandable, however there are just a few nuances to work on such as grammar and phrasing. 

Best of luck! 

Dream Animals

The Ginbis Dream Animals biscuits (i would actually call them "cookies" instead) is a long-selling, very well-known animal-shaped biscuit in Japan.One can also learn the English names of these animals. Even though some of the biscuits are hard to recognize what animals they are with their shapes, there is no problem because they got their names printed on. (This sentence sounds weird, but I can't think of anything better) They are very crunchy with a sweet butter taste. They are very easy to be friends with. (Slightly confused with the last sentence, friends with biscuits?)