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A few weeks ago, I went on a school trip! Some days ago, I went on a school trip. We visited a place where people with drugs' addiction are helped and have a healthy life. We walked to the center and, when we arrived, the employers showed us the rooms of the building. After seeing the whole place, we could imagine the daily life of the people who live there. Then, we met some men and women who decided to eliminate their addictions. They counted us their stories by playing a game. In a circle, we passed a ball and the one who had caught it talked. In this way, we also participated. It was interesting to know how they become addicted, but we were very shy when we had to speak! After that, we walked again to return the school. I thought nothing more would happen, but suddenly I saw a green paper on the floor. When I picked it up, it was a banknote of one hundred euros! I was very excited because of my good luck!

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A few weeks ago, I went on a school trip!

Some days ago, I went on a school trip. We visited a place where people with drugs' addiction [drug addictions] are helped and have a healthy life. [and can live a healthy life]

We walked to the center and, when we arrived, the employers [the employees] showed us the rooms of the building. [the employees gave us a tour of the building] After seeing the whole place, we could imagine the daily life of the people who live [lived] there.

Then, we met some men and women who decided to eliminate [overcome] their addictions. They counted [told] us their stories by playing a game. In a circle, we passed a ball and the one who had caught it talked. [We passed a ball around in a circle, and the one who caught it had to talk.] In this way, we also participated. It was interesting to know how they become [became] addicted, but we were very shy when we had to speak!

After that, we walked again to return the school. [After that, we walked back to school.] I thought nothing more would happen, but suddenly I saw a green paper on the floor. When I picked it up, it was a banknote of one hundred euros! I was very excited because of my good luck!


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