Holliday's
Easter is one of the most important holiday in my country and I got couple of days off so I decided to visit my relatives and go to west part of my country where they are living. First I went to the city where lives my brother with his wife and with they lovely daughter. The distance is really long from place where I live and place where they live, it took for me approximately four hours to get there. I was really happy to see them cuz I haven't seen them for a long time. Next day we together went to the village to visit our granny. Our granny lives in the beautiful village alone and I had no opportunity to visit her for a year. I spent really amazing time with my relatives. I like village. I wish I could stay for couple of weeks or even for month there. But unfortunately I couldn't do that cuz I had only few days off. Right now I'm sitting on the bus and heading up to the city. I'm enjoying the view from window and sometimes readings book that I found in the village. I hope I will finish reading it cuz the road last is 6 hours.
Thanks for reading this and please correct me I really would appreciate your help.
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Holliday's Holidays
Easter is one of the most important holidays in my country and. I got a couple of days off so I decided to visit my relatives and go to the western part of my country where they are living. First I went to the city where lives my brother lives with his wife and with they their lovely daughter. The distance is really long between the place where I live and the place where they live [or "our places"]. It took for me approximately four hours to get there. I was really happy to see them 'cause I haven't seen them for a long time. The next day we together went to the village together to visit our granny. Our granny lives alone in a beautiful village, alone and I had not had the opportunity to visit her for a year. I spent a really amazing time with my relatives. I like being in their village [or "I like villages."]. I wish I could stay there for a couple of weeks or even a month there. But unfortunately I couldn't do that this time 'cause I had only few days off. Right now I'm sitting on the bus and heading up [back?] to the city. I'm enjoying the view out the window and sometimes readings a book that I found in my brother's(or granny's?) village. I hope I will finish reading it 'cause the drive back will take 6 hours.Thanks for reading this and please correct me. I really would appreciate your help.
You expressed yourself well and had very few errors. Just to let you know, 'cuz or 'cause is OK in casual conversation (like text messages) but normally in an essay like this, most people would use "because." It all depends on how formal you want to be. Best wishes!
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Holliday's Holidays
Easter is one of the most important holidays in my country and I got couple of days off so I decided to visit my relatives and go to the western part of my country where they are living. First I went to the city where my lives my brother, with his wife and with they lovely daughter live. It's a long way from my home The distance is really long from place where I live and place where they live, it took for me approximately four hours to get there. I was really happy to see them because cuz I haven't seen them for a long time. The next day we all together went to the village to visit our granny. Our granny lives in a the beautiful village alone and I had not had the opportunity to visit her for a year. I spent a really amazing time with my relatives. I like villages. I wish I could stay for couple of weeks or even for a month there. But unfortunately I couldn't do that because cuz I only had only a few days off. Right now I'm sitting on the bus and heading back up to the city. I'm enjoying the view from window and sometimes readings a book that I found in the village. I hope I will finish reading it because cuz the trip takes road last is six hours.Thanks for reading this and please correct me. I really would appreciate your help.
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Easter is one of the most important holidays in my country and I got couple of days off so I decided to visit my relatives and go to the west part of my country where they are liveing. First, I went to the city where lives my brother lives with his wife and with theyir lovely daughter. The distance is really long from place where I live and place where they live, it took for me approximately four hours to get there. I was really happy to see them cuz I haven't seen them for a long time. Next day we together went to the village together to visit our granny. Our granny lives alone in the beautiful village alone and I had no opportunity to visit her for a year. I spent really amazing time with my relatives. I like village. I wish I could stay there for couple of weeks or even for a month there. But unfortunately I couldn't do that cuz I had only had few days off. Right now I'm sitting on the bus and heading up to the city. I'm enjoying the view from out the window and sometimes readings a book that I found in the village. I hope I will finish reading it cuz the road trip lasts is for 6 hours. Thanks for reading this and please correct me I really would appreciate your help.
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