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Due to the brain drain, is working abroad the right choice for Spanish young people? Argumentative essay You have been asked to write an argumentative essay for the Eye on Spain forum www.eyeonspain.com on the following topic: Due to the brain drain, is working abroad the right choice for Spanish young people? Please include the following information: -introduce the topic to capture the readers’ attention -discuss the current situation in Spain -mention positive and negative aspects -make a conclusion and state your opinion Nowadays, there are a lot of people who have a degree or a Master’s also. That is, qualified people. But, the main problem is that the young people can’t find a job in an easily way or working in their field. It is important to discuss about the current situation in our country (Spain). First of all, there are a lot of unemployment due to the economical crisis and people have to select whatever job. Probably, very different to their studies. Currently, there are more prepared people because students know that there aren’t any jobs and they continue studying to find a good job or working abroad. So, the most important problem is: there are a lot of qualified people but there aren’t jobs for everybody. On the one hand, it is difficult but we could find a positive aspect following the topic such as: the students in Spain are more prepared than in other countries. They study a degree and foreign language also. On the other hand, we can speak about the negative aspects as for example: the brain drain happens because there aren’t employments and they decide to take a chance abroad. In addition, another negative aspect in Spain is the low salary. For this reason, people prefer working in other countries better paid. To sum up, the government has to take into account this important issue. They must offer most and different jobs for the young people and working on abolishing this problematic situation.

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Due to the brain drain, is working abroad the right choice for young Spanish people?

Argumentative essay
You have been asked to write an argumentative essay for the Eye on Spain forum www.eyeonspain.com on the following topic:
Due to the brain drain, is working abroad the right choice for young Spanish people?

Please include the following information:
-introduce the topic to capture the readers’ attention
-discuss the current situation in Spain
-mention positive and negative aspects
-make a conclusion and state your opinion

Nowadays, there are a lot of people who have a degree and perhaps even a master’s. That is, there are a lot of qualified people. But, the main problem is that the young people can’t find a job in an easily way or working in their field easily.
It is important to discuss about the current situation in our country, Spain. First of all, there is a lot of unemployment due to the economical crisis and people have to select whatever job that is probably very different to their studies. Currently, there are more students are more prepared people because students they know that there aren’t many jobs so they continue studying to find a good job or to working abroad. So, the most important problem is: there are a lot of qualified people but there aren’t enough jobs for everybody.
On the one hand, it is difficult but we could find a positive aspects, following the topic such as: the students in Spain are more prepared than those in other countries; and They in addition to studying a degree, they learn a foreign language also.
On the other hand, we can speak about the negative aspects, as for example: the brain drain happens because there are no occupations so they decide to take a chance abroad. Due to the In addition, another negative aspect in Spain is the low salary in Spain. For this reason, people prefer to working in other countries that are better paid.
To sum up, the government has to take into account this important issue. They must offer more and different jobs for the young people and working on abolishing this problematic situation.







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I'm too surprised because this is so different than I imagined about spain. I always thought that country was the better than others country, not just for young's jobs but opportunities in general. (Sorry for my grammatical issues, I'm learning english yet ^^).

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