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Memorization of vocabulary #3 Good day to you, travelers! I'm studying English and could use some help. Please, find my grammar and semantic errors, I'll be grateful ^^. These sentences I made for memorization of vocabulary, and if I missed with lexis - please, improve it too. 1. After that evening Garry and Jill had a fissure in their relationships. 2. Stop butt in an adult conversation! 3. Teacher's words bounsed off Jo's memory. 4. Mother's anger erupted through her usial calmness. 5. Sometimes words doesn't deflect the true nature of a person. 6. What a sort of hypocrite, don't you think? 7. Looks like Ms Jones emits hospitality. 8. In a silence we heard a quiet hoarse. 9. A shred of confidence doesn't hirt you. 10. A chest was took on a beach out by tide. Great thanks for your time!

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Memorization of vocabulary #3

Good day to you, travelers! I'm studying English and could use some help. Please, find my grammar and semantic errors, I'll be grateful ^^. These sentences I made for memorization of vocabulary, and if I missed with lexis - please, improve it too.

1. After that evening, Garry and Jill had a fissure break in their relationships relationship. (This implies they still may get back together. If the break is likely permanent, you would say "After that evening, Garry and Jill broke up", or "...broke off their relationship")
2. Stop butting in on an adult conversation!
3. The teacher's words bounced off Jo's memory.
4. Mother's anger erupted through her usual calmness.
5. Sometimes words doesn't don't deflect the true nature of a person.
6. What a sort of hypocrite, don't you think?
7. It looks like Ms Jones emits  radiates hospitality. (Radiation or light can "emit", not emotions)
8. In a the silence we heard a quiet hoarse sound.  ("Hoarse" is an adjective so needs to qualify something. I chose "sound" but maybe you meant something else ?)
9. A shred of confidence doesn't hurt you. ("Shred" is ok,  but more natural to say "A bit of confidence doesn't hurt you")
10. A chest was took on the beach was taken out by the tide.

Great thanks for your time!

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