Report about Romano's family restaurant

Introduction.
The main purpose of this report is to access assess the new Romano's family restaurant in Norwich which I visited on last week.

Feed Food and prices. (Or you could say Menu and Prices).
There is a varied menu which includes a great pasta dishes dish and interesting desserts. Fortunately it is not expensive there. However, the wine tasted like vinegar.  (As you used the word ‘a’ here the word dish has to be used as it is singular. If you used the word ‘many’ instead, that is when the word dishes would be used as it’s plural).

Service.
Staff in Romano's family restaurant were polite and helpful. Waiters serve served the food quickly. But I noticed one waiter was wearing jeans.

Atmosphere.
Soft music, beautiful furnishings, clean tables and friendly staff help to give to Romano's family restaurant a great atmosphere. Unfortunately there isn't a no-smoking police, policy, so there it is very smoky.

Conclusion.
The Romano's family restaurant is a great place were you can spend your time. There are only a few suggestions to improve the experience of visiting this place. Firstly, managers should check the quality of wines on offer. Secondly, staff should wear a proper uniform. Lastly, start a no-smoking policy, so that parents with children can visit this restaurant.  can visit parents with children.

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p.s. I study British English.

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