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Please check my English diary. I have been studying English for 4 years. I could not initially write well in English for the first time, but I recently came to be able to write English sentences a little. Furthermore, I would like to be able to not only writing, but also reading, speaking and listening more than now.

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Please check my English diary.

I have been studying English for four years.
I could not initially write well in English for the first time, but I recently came to be able to write English sentences a little. Furthermore, I would like to be able to not only write but also reading, speaking and listening more than now.


Very good. I noticed a few things and corrected them for you. When you write numbers, the numbers 1-10 are spelled out. (Example - four years, 12 years)

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Please check my English diary.

I have been studying English for 4 years.
I could not initially write well in English for the first time, but I recently became able to write English sentences a little. Furthermore, I would like to be able to not only write, but also  read, speak and listen more than I can now.


instead of " I recently became able to write English sentences a little" you can write:
but now I can write some simple English sentences.

instead of :but also listen more than I can now.
you can write: also understand spoken English better than I can now.




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Please check my English diary.

I have been studying English for 4 years.
I could not initially write well in English for the first time (repetitive as you already said initially), but I recently came to be able to write English sentences a little. Furthermore, I would like to be able to not only writing (write), but also reading, speaking and listening more than now.


Well done! You're using complicated language, so make sure you understand the words you're using if they're longer. Also make sure to check your tenses and plurality. Great job!

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