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My last birthday My last birthday was two months ago. It was a special birthday beacuse I turned 30 years old.

All my friends frin school will turn 30 this year too, so we decided to make a trip to celebrate it.

The hard thing was to decide where to go.

They live in Spain and I am the only person who lives abroad, so we have to find somewhere in between. That place was New York.

None of my friends had been there before, and I had been there just for four days, so I still had so many places to disvover.

Our plan was awesome, except because I had to wait six hours at the airport by myself. It was very boring but the wait worthed when I saw my friends there.

I have to be honest, I think this trip was the tirest trip ever (we walked too much), but at the same time, I'd never thought New York was so beautiful. What I like the most was the view from Brooklyn Bridge. Fantastic!

I totally recomend to visit New York at least once in life.

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My last birthday

My last birthday was two months ago. It was a special birthday beacuse because I turned 30 years old.

All my friends frin from school will turn 30 this year too, so we decided to make a trip to celebrate it.

The hard thing was to decide where to go.

They live in Spain and I am the only person who lives abroad, so we have had to find somewhere in between. That place was New York.

None of my friends had been there before, and I had been there just for four days, so I still had so many places to disvover discover.

Our plan was awesome, except because that I had to wait six hours at the airport by myself. It was very boring but the wait worthed  was worth it when I saw my friends there.

I have to  must be honest, I think this trip was the tirest  most tiring trip ever (we walked too much), but at the same time, I'd never thought New York was so beautiful. What I like the most was the view from Brooklyn Bridge. Fantastic!

I totally recommend to visiting New York at least once in your life.

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My last birthday

My last birthday was two months ago. It was a special birthday beacuse I turned 30 years old.

All my friends from school are turning 30 this year too, so we decided to take a trip to celebrate this

The hardest thing was to decide where to go.

They live in Spain and I am the only person who lives abroad, so we had to find somewhere in between. That place was New York.

None of my friends had been there before, and I had previously been there just for four days, so I still had so many places to discover.

Our plan was awesome, except (that) because I had to wait six hours at the airport by myself. It was very boring but finally seeing my friends made the wait worth it. the wait worthed when I saw my friends there.

I have to be honest, I think this trip was most tiring trip ever (we walked too much), but at the same time, I'd never thought New York was so beautiful. What I liked the most was the view from Brooklyn Bridge. Fantastic!

I totally recommend visiting New York at least once in your life.

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tire - verb
tired (passive) /tiring (active)
The trip was very tiring.  I was very tired at the end of it. 

(works just like boring/bored; interesting/interested; exciting/excited)

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