Could you help my English study?
Below is an email practice sample in English.
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Dear Jack-san,
Hello, Nice e-meet you.
Thank you for your article request to the ABC magazine.
My name is an editor's Hiro in ABC company.
I attached a sample which will be published in the ABC magazine in July.
Please check your company's article in red frame.
Let me know if you would like to change some photo and contents by 1 p.m. on April 10.
Best regards,
Hiro
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Dear Jack,
Hello, Nice to meet you.
Thank you for your article request to the ABC magazine.
I am Hiro, an editor at ABC company.
I attached a sample which will be published in the ABC magazine in July.
Please check your company's article. It has a red frame.
Let me know if you would like to change the photo(s) or contents by 1 p.m. on April 10.
Best regards,
Hiro
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Good job, Hiro! I made some grammatical adjustments which make it sound a bit more natural. Let me know if you want me to clarify what I did.
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こにちわHey 👋 i would like to help you in your english lets do our best ;-;
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