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Plastic Pollution
Disposable plastic bags were once widely used in China. People used to take them from shops and shop assistants often provided free plastic bags for our convenience. For a while, life without them seemed inconvenient for most of us.
However, disposable plastic bags do cause severe damage to our environment and animals.Recently, a dead whale was washed ashore on the coast of Italy, with nearly 50 pounds of plastic waste in its stomach. Plastic bags hardly decompose, therefore, they may kills animals.
Then, how can we solve this big problem? Some people believe that new laws should be proposed and implemented to regulate people’s use of plastic materials. Others think it is of primary importance to develop technologies that can prevent such kind of pollution. In my opinion, we should first legislate because our country's science and technology is not mature at present, and it will take a lot of time and money to solve the problem of plastic pollution through science and technology. Therefore, we should first improve the relevant laws on the use of plastic bags and reduce the use of plastic bags.
To sum up, it is important to limit the use of disposable plastics. It's critical that our government bans the use of disposable plastic bags officially, and the government should raise the tax on plastic bags, instead encouraging the use of bio-degradable alternatives.
Everyone in this society should contribute to the improvement of the environment. We should protect our earth and living environment to make better lives for all.
寫得不錯
-標題裡面的每一個詞的第一個字皆要大寫
-你的格式有問題。段落之間要留一行空白
-標點符號,如句號、逗號、冒號等後面要加上空格才對。若不加上,便非常難看,就像如果一篇文章裡面充滿著錯別字一樣。
-"How to"是錯誤的英文。
-Meaning之意為“很有意義”
-英文句子不能以and開頭
Plastic Problem
In modern world, Disposable plastic bags were once widely used in China. People used them to take it for shopping and shop assistants often provided them free plastic bags for our the convenience of shoppers.For a while, life without them seemed inconvenient to inconvenience for most of us.However, disposable plastic bags do cause bring severe damages to our environment and lots of harms to animals.Recently, a dead whale was washed ashore on the coast of Italy, with nearly 50 pounds of plastic waste in its stomach. Plastic bags are hardly to decomposes,and therefore,it they can may kills animals.
Then, how do we to solve this big problem? Some people believe that new laws should be proposed and implemented to regulate people’s use of plastic materials. Others think it is of primary importance to develop technologies that can prevent such kinds of pollution. In my opinion, we should first legislate. Because our country's science and technology is not mature at present, and it takes a lot of time and money to solve the problem of plastic bags through science and technology. Therefore, because through science and technology can not solve the problem immediately, we should first improve the relevant laws on the use of plastic bags, by reducing reduce the use of plastic bags.
To sum up, it is meaningful to limit the use of disposable plastic. It's significant that our government has banned the use of disposable plastic bags officially. And the government should raise the tax on plastic bags, while encouraging encourage the use of degradable sacks.
Everyone in this society should contribute some effort to the improvement of the environment. We should protect our earth and living environment to make a better life for all.
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