Life (I would appreciate any corrections here)
Some of us will never live, but always waiting for a better future. We instead of being happy and enjoying today. Be glad of what we are and what we have in our life. We are hoping to have a good future, and so we are losing ours today. We want more time and money, a better job, retirement, travel and vacations. That's why we lose today and do not pay attention to this at all. No matter what happens in the future. If you can eat today, enjoy the sun, talk with your friends and laugh. Then you thank God and enjoy your today. You don't look at bad memories and don't worry about the future.
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Life (I would appreciate any corrections here)
Some of us will never live, but will always wait for a better future instead of being happy and enjoying life today. Be glad of who and what we are and what we have in our life. We are hoping to have a good future, and so we are losing ours (our what? what you are referring to is not really clear.) today. We want more time and money, a better job, retirement, travel and vacations. That's why we lose today and do not pay attention to this at all. No matter what happens in the future, (and then what? this is a sentence fragment and you need another clause to complete it). If you can eat today, enjoy the sun, talk with your friends and laugh (another fragment. you need to write another clause to complete this sentence). Then you thank God and enjoy your today. You don't look at bad memories and don't worry about the future.
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