My neighbor
My neighbor has an eight-year-old girl. She is learning to play a musical instrument, and she often practices at home. So I always hear different music she plays. Very lovely.
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Tong, your writing is descriptive and clear. I can imagine this young musician practicing, and I know from your writing that her playing is lovely. By adding 'the' before 'different music', your writing will sound more native. Great job!
My neighbor
My neighbor has an eight-year-old girl. She is learning to play a musical instrument, and she often practices at home. So I always hear the different music she plays. Very lovely.1
My neighbor has an eight-year-old girl. She is learning to play a musical instrument and often practices at home. So, I always hear the different music that she plays. It is very lovely.
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