My daily Essay.
There is no such thing as "doing something in vain" or "doing something for nothing". if you were still young, don't live your life, lead it. And come on, just do it if you have an ideal. You might not be a king when you were born, but you can make one and must have courage to despise your fate. You can fall down, you can be defeated either, but you can't yield to your fate and stop fighting., so just be whoever you want to be, even if you will suffer, feel all alone. After all, we were not born to please anyone, and the world is just a sort of dream, and we just hold our responsibility for our right and wrong behaviour when we are alive.
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There is no such thing as "doing something in vain" or "doing something for nothing". If you are still young, don't just passively live your life. Lead it! And come on, if you have an idea, just do it. You might not have been born as a king, but you can mould yourself into one and have the courage despite your fate. You can fall down and you can be defeated as well, but you can't yield to your fate and stop fighting. So, just be whoever you want to be, even if you will suffer and feel all alone. After all, we were not born to please anyone, and the world is just a sort of dream. We just hold responsibility for our right and wrong behaviour when we are alive.
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