The imbalance between population and resources
The population of the world continues to grow, while the word's resources are rapidly being depleted. If human beings are to survive on this planet, it is essential that urgent measures be taken to deal with the imbalance between population and resources.
One of the main problems in the world is growing population. As a result is reducing resources. Imbalance between population and resources is growing. Government of countries looks at this problem with different ways.
Country with the biggest population on the planet is China. Government of China understands it and they accept different laws to avoid growing population and reducing resources. As I know one of them was “one family – one child”. This law was cancel in 2016. And this law show good result – population started to reduce. One child in family isn’t bad, badly when we will start to fight for resources.
Other country, for example, Russia looks at this problem another way. Government of Russia doesn’t accept laws for reducing population. On the contrary, they try to increase population and give money for third and more measure of kids in one family. It is good politic for families, but bad for future and bad for resources.
In my opinion, the softest way to avoid imbalance between population and resources is control measure of people by accepting a law “one family – not more two kids”. If there are two kids in one family, population will be constant.
At the end, I think that may be population will reduce without laws. Because temp of our life is increase and most of us think about career and forget to create family. But when they start to think about this then too late.
p.s. Thanos is coming ))))
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The imbalance between population and resources
The population of the world continues to grow, while the word's resources are rapidly being depleted. If human beings are to survive on this planet, it is essential that urgent measures be taken to deal with the imbalance between population and resources.
One of the main problems in the world is the rapid growth of the global population. As a result of this (referencing shows greater fluency),resources are reducing thus leading to the rapid instability between the resources available and the resources people need. Many government bodies look at this problem in different ways.
To illustrate this, the country with the biggest population on the planet is China. The Chinese government understands this problem and they have implemented different laws to avoid the further growth of the population and reduction of resources. One famous law that was passed was the 'one-child law'. This was changed in 2016 when the ban on having two or more children was lifted – the population started to reduce. Having one child in a family isn’t bad, badly when we will start to fight for resources.(this part is unclear. Can you clarify this?)
Other countries, for example Russia, looks at this problem in another way. The government of Russia doesn’t accept laws for the purpose of reducing the population. On the contrary, they try to increase the population and give money for third and more measure of kids(needs clarification) in one family. It is a good rule for families, but bad for the future and for resources.
In my opinion, the most practical way to avoid imbalance between population and resources is to control how many people can be in a family. For example one family should not have more than two children. If there are two children in one family, the population will be stable.
At the end, I think that maybe the population will fall without the implementation of any laws because temp of our life is increase (this part is unclear) and most of us think about our careers and neglect to build families. But when they start to think about this then it is too late.
p.s. Thanos is coming ))))
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Hi Nadia! I enjoyed reading your essay. Here are some corrections for you! I hope you find them helpful. Please let me know if you have any questions. --Nicole
The imbalance between population and resources
The population of the world continues to grow, while the word's resources are rapidly being depleted. If human beings are to survive on this planet, it is essential that urgent measures be taken to deal with the imbalance between population and resources.
One of the main problems in the world is growing population populations. As a result is reducing resources resources are being reduced. The Imbalance between population the world's population and our resources is growing. Government Governments of countries looks look at this problem with in different ways.
In my opinion, the softest (Do you mean to say 'safest'?) way to avoid an imbalance between the population and our resources is to control the measure of people by accepting a law “one family – not more than two kids” law. If there are two kids in one family, the population will be stay constant.
At the end, I think that may be maybe the population will reduce without laws. Because temp of our life is increase (I am not sure what you mean by this phrase.) and most of us think about career careers and forget to create a family. But when they start to think about this then it is too late.
p.s. Thanos is coming ))))
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In my opinion, The Earth has enough resources for all of humans. But the problem here is greedy people. If we can actually share everything fair, there would be no problem.
Bonus Question: When Thanos came, Which half would you be in? the ones who stay alive or gone? :)
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