The Japanese potato chips
The Calbee Potato Chips Seaweed ＆ salt are long-selling very well known chips with Japanese classic nori seaweed flavor. They are well blended with unique spices with the umami flavor from nori seaweed. Once you try them, you'll know why this flavor has been so popular for so long in Japan!
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The Japanese potato chips
The Calbee Potato Chips Seaweed ＆ salt seaweed & salt flavored Calbee potato chips are a long-selling very well known chips snack with classic Japanese classic nori seaweed flavor. They are well blended with unique spices with that have the umami flavor from nori seaweed. Once you try them, you'll know why this flavor has been so popular for so long in Japan!For more my drawing, check out my Instagram page!
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Most of these corrections are just to make it sound more natural, your grammar is good. Here are a few brief notes.
1. When describing a flavored food we usually say " X flavored Y" especially when the flavor is complicated or unusual. The flavor should always come first though. "Seaweed and salt Calbee potato chips" would also be okay.
2. "well known chips" is okay, but is very specific. We'd usually say a well known "snack" or "treat" because it sounds more impressive. Think of it like if I said I make the best bacon flavored almond milk lattes in the world. It doesn't sound impressive because no one makes them. Saying "chips" makes it more specific and feel less exciting, which is the opposite of what "very well know" feels like, so it sounds unnatural.
3. "Classic Japanese nori seaweed flavor" sounds more natural.
Classic Japanese nori seaweed flavor - A seaweed flavor that is traditional to Japan.
Japanese Classic nori seaweed flavor - The Japanese version of the traditional seaweed flavor we all know.
This is a bit hard to explain, but maybe looking at how it's built helps?
Nori Seaweed flavor ------- Classic Nori Seaweed flavor ------------------ Japanese Classic nori seaweed flavor
Nori Seaweed flavor ------- Japanese Nori Seaweed flavor ---------------- Classic Japanese nori seaweed flavor
4. I changed your second "with" to "that have" just because having "with" twice really quickly sounds unnatural and a little confusing.
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