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MY HOMETOWN I live in Rome, the capital city. I quite like living here because although is a big city, all the neighbourhood have a real connection and sense of community. Rome is a real bustling city, you can find all the facilities like shops, but seeing as Rome is really big is difficult to go to places with public transport. Rome is famous for is beautiful landmarks like the Colosseum and the basilica of St Peter, but for me the real charm of Rome is in the little and the old neighbourhood. The thinks that I don't like about Rome are especially two: pollution and degradation. The first is by now really common in all the cities and also in the village. Particularly in big cities is difficult to lower uses of pollutant but for me the government but in first place citizen in future will have more attention on treat our word better. The second is important in the older neighbourhood. Infact a lot of them are in bad condition and for me is time to bring them to their beautiful again.

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I live in Rome the capital city. Although it is a big city, I like living here very much because citizens have a real connection and a sense of community. Rome is a really bustling city, as you can find all the facilities like shops. Rome is famous for its beautiful landmarks like the Colosseum and the basilica of St Peter, but for me the real charm of Rome is the little and old neighbourhood. However, there are two things about Rome which I don't like: pollution and degradation. The first is really common now in all cities and villages. It is particularly difficult to lower the emission of pollutants in big cities. Therefore, the government should in put citizens' health in the first priority by carrying out environmental protection measures. For degradation, it is significant in the older neighbourhood. It is time to for us to make them beautiful again. 
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A fair piece of writing with certain grammatical errors. Good try!
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Keep it up! Looking forward to your improvement!
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