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Hello there my name is Toni, i live in Las Palmas de Gran Canaria, it is in the canary islands, Spain. I live here since november 2018. In the past i lived in Pamplona that is in the north of the country, then i moved to Madrid when i finished my university studies. I am originary from Dominican Republic that's why i needed to come to a city plenty of sun and beach. I strongly recomend Canarias beacuse the wheather and the people here are amazing both canarian and foreing people. They have good food, the better parties ever and you can practice sports like surf, beach volleyball, diving, swiming. Canarias is a heaven within reach of anyone.
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*** Very nicely written; I understand all of it. Just a few, small corrections
*** Combining two sentences with a comma is a technical error. Use a period and capitalize the next word and you should be fine.
*** Proper nouns like names, months, are capitalized, as well as I. Comma after month, before year. If the sentence continues, a comma after the year is also required to be technically correct.
*** Best is used when comparing more than 2 items. Better is used when comparing two things.
*** The last sentence, no sure if should be 'is' or 'are' so I left it be. Someone else may be able to help. I personally would use 'are' to make it sound more natural since 'Canaries' is a plural word at it's base.
*** The main issue is spelling but don't worry about that because spell check can fix that very easily in the future.
*First time writting in iTALKI *
Hello there my name is Toni. I live in Las Palmas de Gran Canaria. It is in the Canary Islands, Spain. I have lived here since November, 2018. In the past, I lived in Pamplona which that is in the north of the country. Then i moved to Madrid when i finished my university studies. I am originally from Dominican Republic. That's why i needed to come to a city with plenty of sun and beach. I strongly recommend the Canaries because the weather, and the people here are amazing, both the Canarian and foreign people. They have good food, the best better parties ever and you can practice sports like surfing, beach volleyball, diving, swimming. The Canaries is a heaven within reach of anyone.
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