Could you help me by fixing my mistakes?
I made sentences for my introduction.
If I make a mistake, please correct me.
Hello, and thank you for your interest.
I was born and raised in Kyoto, so this is my hometown.
I'm a weekend your guide in Kyoto. I work as normal employee from Monday to Friday.
So I can give tour only on weekends.
There are a number of national treasures, important cultural properties and world heritages in Kyoto.
You can enjoy quaint sceneries and simple Japanese conversation with a truly local Japanese who is attracted to Kyoto.
Let's take a walk and find your own hidden gems with me!
I'll show you our neighborhood in Kyoto.
I always try to act in ways suitable for your situation
because it's a pleasure to serve you.
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Could you help me by fixing my mistakes?
I wrote sentences for my introduction.If I made a mistake, please correct me.
Hello and thank you for your interest.
I was born and raised in Kyoto, so this is my hometown.
I'm a weekend tour guide in Kyoto. I work as a full-time employee from Monday to Friday, so I can only give tours on weekends.
There are a number of national treasures, important cultural properties [not the best word as it sounds as though you mean aspects, another connotation of properties] and world heritage sites in Kyoto.
You can enjoy quaint scenery and simple Japanese conversation with a true local who loves Kyoto.
Let's take a walk and find your own hidden gems with me!
I'll show you our neighborhood in Kyoto. [It isn't wrong to say in Kyoto, but at this point we know it's in Kyoto and it is generally desirable to avoid repeating words unnecessarily]
I always try to act in ways suitable for your situation, because it's a pleasure to serve you. [The last sentence is awkward, because it portrays you as perhaps overly submissive, and also because it isn't clear what exactly you mean. Do you mean you'll speak at an appropriate level to be understood, and tailor your tours to the interests of your clients? If so I would say that instead.]
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Could you help me by fixing my mistakes?
I made sentences for my introduction.If I have made make a mistake, please correct me.
Hello, and thank you for your interest.
I was born and raised in Kyoto, so this is my hometown.
I'm a weekend your weekend guide in Kyoto. I work as a normal employee from Monday to Friday.
So I can give tours only on weekends.
There are a number of national treasures, important cultural landmarks properties and world heritage sites in Kyoto.
You can enjoy quaint scenery sceneries and a simple Japanese conversation with a truly local Japanese who is attracted to Kyoto.
Let's take a walk and find your own hidden gems with me!
I'll show you our neighborhood in Kyoto.
I always try to provide what a customer wants act in ways suitable for your situation
because it's that is my a pleasure to serve you.
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I made sentences for my introduction.
If I make a mistake, please correct me.
Hello, and thank you for your interest.
I was born and raised in Kyoto which is my hometown.
I'm your weekend guide in Kyoto. I work as a normal employee from Monday to Friday so I can give tours only on weekends.
There are a number of national treasures, important cultural properties and world heritages in Kyoto.
You can enjoy quaint sceneries and simple Japanese conversation with a truly local Japanese who is attracted to Kyoto.
Let's take a walk and find your own hidden gems with me!
I'll show you our neighborhood in Kyoto.
I will always try and act in ways suitable for your situation because it's a pleasure to serve you.
If I make a mistake, please correct me.
Hello, and thank you for your interest.
I was born and raised in Kyoto which is my hometown.
I'm your weekend guide in Kyoto. I work as a normal employee from Monday to Friday so I can give tours only on weekends.
There are a number of national treasures, important cultural properties and world heritages in Kyoto.
You can enjoy quaint sceneries and simple Japanese conversation with a truly local Japanese who is attracted to Kyoto.
Let's take a walk and find your own hidden gems with me!
I'll show you our neighborhood in Kyoto.
I will always try and act in ways suitable for your situation because it's a pleasure to serve you.
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I made sentences for my introduction.
If I make a mistake, please correct me.
Hello, and thank you for your interest.
I was born and raised in Kyoto which is my hometown.
I'm your weekend guide in Kyoto. I work as a normal employee from Monday to Friday so I can give tours only on weekends.
There are a number of national treasures, important cultural properties and world heritages in Kyoto.
You can enjoy quaint sceneries and simple Japanese conversation with a truly local Japanese who is attracted to Kyoto.
Let's take a walk and find your own hidden gems with me!
I'll show you our neighborhood in Kyoto.
I will always try and act in ways suitable for your situation because it's a pleasure to serve you.
If I make a mistake, please correct me.
Hello, and thank you for your interest.
I was born and raised in Kyoto which is my hometown.
I'm your weekend guide in Kyoto. I work as a normal employee from Monday to Friday so I can give tours only on weekends.
There are a number of national treasures, important cultural properties and world heritages in Kyoto.
You can enjoy quaint sceneries and simple Japanese conversation with a truly local Japanese who is attracted to Kyoto.
Let's take a walk and find your own hidden gems with me!
I'll show you our neighborhood in Kyoto.
I will always try and act in ways suitable for your situation because it's a pleasure to serve you.
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I made sentences for my introduction.
If I make a mistake, please correct me.
Hello, and thank you for your interest.
I was born and raised in Kyoto which is my hometown.
I'm your weekend guide in Kyoto. I work as a normal employee from Monday to Friday so I can give tours only on weekends.
There are a number of national treasures, important cultural properties and world heritages in Kyoto.
You can enjoy quaint sceneries and simple Japanese conversation with a truly local Japanese who is attracted to Kyoto.
Let's take a walk and find your own hidden gems with me!
I'll show you our neighborhood in Kyoto.
I will always try and act in ways suitable for your situation because it's a pleasure to serve you.
If I make a mistake, please correct me.
Hello, and thank you for your interest.
I was born and raised in Kyoto which is my hometown.
I'm your weekend guide in Kyoto. I work as a normal employee from Monday to Friday so I can give tours only on weekends.
There are a number of national treasures, important cultural properties and world heritages in Kyoto.
You can enjoy quaint sceneries and simple Japanese conversation with a truly local Japanese who is attracted to Kyoto.
Let's take a walk and find your own hidden gems with me!
I'll show you our neighborhood in Kyoto.
I will always try and act in ways suitable for your situation because it's a pleasure to serve you.
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