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YaRo
Please make my text more natural Some days ago I became a millionaire, I hold 2 millions in my hands. Although I spend them just for 5 days, that was a pleasure to have them.... Ok ok .... it is time to say there were 2 000 000 balian rupi. So it was actually about 150 $ hahaha

So taxi costs 10 000, good lunch in casual place costs 50 000. And I bought 3 summer dresses for 200 000. I could say I am spending here much less money that I was going to spend. Living cost is crazy cheap. And after Shanghai it seems to me I don’t buy fruits , I get them for free....

Bali island is not about one week trip. Manta point, Nusa, Ubud, and many others are left for discovering. Despite I gratitude every moment I had here, I was thinking it is not enough.

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Some days ago I became a millionaire. I held 2 million in my hands. Although I spent it all in just 5 days, it was a pleasure to do so. Ok ok, so it was actually 2 million Balian rupees, which is only about $150, hahaha.

A taxi costs 10,000, a good lunch in a casual place costs 50,000. I bought 3 summer dresses for 200,000. I spent much less there than I was going to spend. The cost of living is crazy cheap. And after visiting Shanghai, buying fruit is practically free.

Visiting Bali island is more than a one week trip. Manta point, Nusa, Ubud, and many other places are left for discovering. Despite my gratitude for every moment there, I think it is not enough.

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wow, hopr you enjoy in my country

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