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My vacation to Colan I´m cheking in at airport for my trip to Colan. It´s in Piura, Peru. My suitcase isn´t heave, so I don´t have problems in the airport. There are many Hotels, but I stay in my aunt´s house. The North food is good, I can eat saltado al chabelo or ceviche. The weather is good, It´s always sunny and hot there. You should use a t-shirt and sandals. Visit Colan I can swin on the beach. Piura is an interesting place for know.

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underline = something I've added

strikethrough = something I've removed

[ inside brackets ] = something optional, not necessary, a suggestion

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My Vacation to Colan

I´m cheking checking in at the airport for my trip to Colan. It´s in Piura, Peru. My suitcase isn´t heave heavy, so I don´t have problems in the airport. There are many Hotels, but I stay in my aunt´s house [ instead ]. The North Northern food is good, I can eat saltado al chabelo or ceviche. The weather is good [ as well ], It´s always sunny and hot there. You should use a t-shirt and sandals. While visiting Colan, I can swin on swim at the beach. Piura is an interesting place for know [ to explore ].

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I capitalize "V" in vacation because, in English we usually capitalize the words in a title (but we do not capitalize "to", "and", "but" etc.)

"The Northern food" = "The food from the North"

Overall you did very well. One more thing I would point out, is you are using an accent ´ instead of an apostrophe ' . You are writing "my aunt´s house" instead of "my aunt's house".

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My Vacation to Colan

I'm checking in at the airport for my trip to Colan. It's in Piura, Peru. My suitcase isn't heavy, so I don't have problems in the airport. There are many Hotels, but I stay in my aunt's house instead. The Northern food is good, I can eat saltado al chabelo or ceviche. The weather is good as well, it's always sunny and hot there. You should use a t-shirt and sandals. While visiting Colan, I can swim at the beach. Piura is an interesting place to explore.

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