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Russia flagAnna Samsonova
Changes in education The world is changing very fast and now, in 21st century, the education system must match these changes. So, we need to set up a new appropriate system to provide kids worldwide with useful knowledge for their best future. Also it's necessary to realize that the knowledge must be up-to-date and must help kids in searching their jobs. As a result, we need to deny the old way of teaching and learning by just memorizing tons of words and texts because this type of teaching makes people's knowledge not valuable. It's a mass production model without providing an individualized experience to anybody. What I mean to say is that a new education system must include modern technologies, practice and, the most important thing - personalized approach to give kids an opportunity to progress along with the science and world. Moreover, I believe that if kids don't want to learn then there is no one who can make them do it. Therefore a new system must not force them to learn information that they are not interested in or do it in exact order and time. So we need to give kids freedom and it will allow them to study with their own free will. So, I think it would have an incredible impact, beneficially, on the world.

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Beautifully written! It is almost perfect. You have a strong handle on the written English. I personally wouldn't start a written sentence with the word 'So'; it may be technically correct; not sure. After word ALso at the beginning of the sentence, have a comma after also.

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