Hello Lujan,

The subject matter is somewhat abstract, so sometimes it was difficult for me to understand what your intended meaning was.   I did a little bit of guessing.  You can ask for more help with any sentences where the translation still might not match the idea you wanted to convey.

This seemed somewhat philosophical, somewhat poetic, somewhat like a stream of consciousness.  So when something wasn't a complete sentence, I let it stay that way rather than trying to "correct it" by making it become a complete sentence. 

"weather" and "whether" are homonyms.   We use the word "weather" to talk about it being hot, cold, sunny, rainy, snowy, windy.  "Whether" is used to talk about a choice among alternatives.  For example, "What is the weather going to be like tomorrow?  I need to decide whether to wear pants or shorts."

The edits are being posted in a separate correction because italki's character limits won't let me submit something as long as what I wrote.

Society and human behaviorLiving in a world where existence itself is has been (or "is being") carved into images. Just like pinheads which are (I'm confused about the meaning of this sentence). It is not as such an arduous task to believe that such a thing has poked up into the deepest in parts of our lives.
They need that drug being shoted up into their veins, running through them, to make them feel alive.
Don´t comprehend weather whether that might fell people to be more connected, or are they setting out in a far away trip indeed?.  (Maybe "We might not comprehend whether that might make people feel more connected, or is it like they are setting out on a far away trip indeed?")
Disconnected from reality buy but prone to falled falling onto into the same ridiculous stereotypes of what a woman or a man is supposed to be.  (Or did you want something like, "Disconnected from reality because of being prone to..."  ?)
Ego maybe? Or just a retrograde ideal of building a sense of belonging inside certain groups?
Where was the whole refinement of a well known businesswoman who comed came out from the toilet without washing her hands?
Maybe those microbies microbes are still rotten rotting her brain retenlessly relentlessly.
Or Where had gone the whole authoristarism authoritarianism of a man who is not able to be empatic empathetic with his colleagues?  (Maybe, "What happened to the whole authoritarianism..." ?.   It's trickier to think of a way to write this particular sentence with a "where" beginning.  Maybe "Where had the whole authoritarianism gone -- the authoritarianism of a man who is not able to be empathetic with his colleagues?").  Is it in fact something what is worth to be developed? ("that is worth developing" or "that is worthwhile to develop" are my suggestions)
Is it something which can be called “respectful”?
Hypocrisy.
Unfortunately it reseambles appears (or "seems") as if society can not be managed without it.