Mother's Day
Mother’s Day is coming.
I am planning to have lunch date with my immediate family for mother’s day.
Discussing with my sister, we are going to reserve a vegetarian restaurant on Sat. in mid May.
We don’t have an idea to surprise my mom. All we want is to make my mom and everyone feel easy and happy.
What are you going to do for Mother’s Day?
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Mother's Day
Mother’s Day is coming. I am planning to have lunch date with my immediate family for mother’s day. After discussing with my sister, we (have decided that we) are going to reserve a vegetarian restaurant on Saturday in mid May. We don’t have an idea to surprise my mum (yet). All we want is to make my mum and everyone feel easy and happy.What are you going to do for Mother’s Day?
Very good! Comments:
-Date的翻譯為約會，在英文裡往往帶有浪費的含義。例如我與自己的女朋友出去約會了 I went on a date with my girlfriend
-Discussing with my sister之意為“我正在與我的姐姐/妹妹討論”。若你想表達“與姐姐/妹妹討論了（之後）“，那你要加上after
-Sat為Saturday的縮寫，在正式文章裡很少用
-Mom為美國的拼寫。英國人習慣用mum
-Easy在這裡不能用，你想表達的是甚麽呢？
-另外，英國的Mother's Day早就過了，看來美國Mother's Day的日期與我們這裡的不同！
寫得很好！加油！
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