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Morden Time Finaly i rented DVD's include Daniel recomend ones! I selected " ●Mordern Times" ●Before Sunset ●Casablanca ●The Barbarian Invasions ●Butterfly tongues ● Il ferroviere I wanted to rent "Citizen kean" and "The light" but unfortunately i didn have enough money so i couldnt rent them:( Next time i will rent!! Today i watched Morden Times. Charles Chaplin filmed this one when the age of Capitalism今もだけど笑 I felt like People is one of the toothed wheel in the society. At the begginig of the film, the president didnt do work (I mean operation work) but he indicate to worker. I was took the class of bureaucracy, so i waas interested in this scene :) I think this movie gave the power and hope to live in this society to then people (especialy worker) In this movie, many people does not hava a job (becouse many peole come to factory) and happend strike.. At this time peole had big uneasiness to future or tomorrow maybe. In this one, Chaplin and woman try to make dreams come true even they dont have life time work and puted into prison. People could understand Chaplin and womans feeling, dream, and reality... There is many reason that people can enphathize this movie...I think. I think this movie's message is "Buck up- never say die. We'll get along!" Last scene was beutiful and fill with the hope to life:) When they walked on street, Chaplin sayid her "Smile!" then she smiled, hold hands each other... Wonderful! I love this ending scene. I felt happiness as same as when i watched "It is a wonderful life". Today I am going to Summer festival with my friends:) I would like to watch "Butterfly tongues" tonight. Thank you for reading! Have a nice day. keiko

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Excellent analysis. Analysing films is difficult to do in one's native tongue, but even harder in a foreign language. Please write about the other films as well when you are able to watch them :)
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Modern Times

Finally, I rented DVD's including some of the films that Daniel recomended!

I selected:
● "Modern Times"
● "Before Sunset"
● "Casablanca"
● "The Barbarian Invasions" 
● "Butterfly tongues"
● "Il ferroviere"

I wanted to rent "Citizen Kane" and "The light", but unfortunately i didn't have enough money to rent them :( Next time I will!! rent

Today I watched Modern Times.

Although Charles Chaplin filmed this during (or "about") The Great Depression, even today I laughed! one when the age of Capitalism今もだけど笑

I felt as though the film portrayed like People as one of the toothed wheel in the society. At the beginning of the film, the president didnt do the work himself (I mean operation work) but he just indicate to ordered around the workers. I was took a class in bureaucracy, so i was interested in this scene :)

I think this movie gave the power and hope needed to live in that society to the people (especialy workers). In this movie, many people did not have a job (because many people come to factory) and so decided to strike.
At that time people had big uneasiness about their futures.

In this film, Chaplin and a woman try to make their dreams come true, even they don't have life time work stable employment and were puted into prison. People could understand Chaplin and woman's feelings; dream and reality... There are many reason ways that people can emphathize with this movie...I think. Empathize! Good word :)

I think this movie's message is "Buck up- never say die. We'll get along!"
The last scene was beautiful and filled with the hope for life:) When they walked down the street, Chaplin said her "Smile!" then she smiled, holding hands with each other... Wonderful! I love this ending scene.
I felt the same happiness as when i watched "It is a wonderful life".

Today I am going to ("a" or "the" should be here unless "Summer festival" is the name of the festival!) Summer festival with my friends:)
I would like to watch "Butterfly tongues" tonight.

Thank you for reading!
Have a nice day.
keiko

 

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Modern Times

Finally I rented DVD's including ones that Daniel recommended!

I selected
●Modern Times
●Before Sunset
●Casablanca
●The Barbarian Invasions
●Butterfly Tongues
● Il ferroviere

I wanted to rent "Citizen Kane" and "The Light" but unfortunately I didn't have enough money, so I couldn't rent them. :( Next time I will rent them!!

Today I watched Modern Times.
Charles Chaplin filmed this one when the age of Capitalism今もだけど笑
I felt like People are one of the toothed wheels in the society. In the beginning of the film, the president didn't do work, (I mean operation work) but he indicated to workers. I was taking a class on bureaucracy, so I was interested in this scene. :)

I think this movie gave the power and hope to live in this society, to the people (especialy workers). In this movie, many people did not have a job, (because many people came to the factory) and a strike happened.
At this time peole had big uneasiness about the future.
In this movie, Chaplin and a woman try to make dreams come true even they don't have guaranteed work and were put into prison. People could understand Chaplin and the woman's feelings, dreams, and reality... There are many reasons that people can emphathize with this movie...I think.

I think this movie's message is "Buck up- never say die. We'll get along!"
The last scene was beautiful and filled with the hope to live. :) When they walked on the street, Chaplin said to her, "Smile!", then she smiled, and they held hands. Wonderful! I loved the ending scene.
I felt as happy as when I watched "It's a Wonderful Life".

Today I am going to the Summer festival with my friends. :)
I would like to watch "Butterfly tongues" tonight.

Thank you for reading!
Have a nice day.
keiko

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