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Please help me out:( It's been a long time since I've been practicing my writing in English.  It would be greatly appreciated if there is anyone helping me out to proofread my writings. Thank you!  Theme: What have you put the most of your effort into in your student days?  “Approaching theoretical study helped me enjoy my study abroad life”  During college, I put my efforts the most into the class called “intercultural communication”. Even though I did not have any problem to communicate in Japanese at all, I had a hard time to understand its cultures. To overcome this difficulty, I decided to approach a theoretical way to research intercultural study instead of going through everything in a real life without deep understanding cultural part of Japan. In the class, I was assigned a lot of time to discuss with other students what we think about Japanese cultures and people. The professor in the class said that “it shows that you guys are coming from the different countries as a majority of you guys feel uncomfortable and negative about Japanese cultures.” As we had time to share our own ideas about Japanese cultures and the opportunity to get interpreted by the professor, everything falls into place in my mind. I was able to have a better understanding of the Japanese cultures than before. As a result, I could enjoy my study abroad life in Japan way more than before as I made a lot of local friends.

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Please help me out:(

It's been a long time since I've been practicing my writing in English. 
It would be greatly appreciated if there is anyone helping me out to proofread my writings.

Thank you! 

Theme: What have you put the most of your effort into in your student days? 
“Approaching theoretical study helped me enjoy my study abroad life” 
During college, I put my most of my effort efforts the most into the class called “intercultural communication”. Even though I did not have any problem to communicate in Japanese at all, I had a hard time to understanding its cultures. To overcome this difficulty, I decided to approach a theoretical way to research intercultural study instead of going through everything in a real life without a deep cultural understanding cultural part of Japan. In the class, I was assigned a lot of time to discuss with other students what we think about Japanese cultures and people. The professor in the class said that “it shows that you guys are coming from the different countries as a majority of you guys feel uncomfortable and negative about Japanese cultures.” As we had time to share our own ideas about Japanese cultures and the opportunity to get interpreted by the professor, everything falls into place in my mind. I was able to have a better understanding of the Japanese cultures than before. As a result, I could enjoy my study abroad life in Japan way more than before as I made a lot of local friends.

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