Taking SAKURA pictures
I went to park with my son today. Though I took many SAKURA pictures, it was difficult to take a beautiful picture. Because it was windy today. SAKURA didn't stop. So, it was difficult to release the shutter properly. In addition, the composition of a photo is also difficult for me. I would like to study typical good compositions.
Thank you so much!
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Hi Andy, Gitana, and Douglas,
Thank you so much for spending your time for correcting my English.
I will write better sentences next time!!
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Taking sakura pictures
I went to park with my son today. Though I took many sakura pictures, it was difficult to take a (really/satisfyingly) beautiful picture because it was so windy that the blossoms wouldn't stay still and it was difficult to release the shutter properly. In addition, the composition of a photo is also difficult for me. maybe "has always been difficult for me." I would like to study good and typical compositions.For 桜, you can say cherry blossoms. If you are purposely using a foreign phrase, sometimes literature will put it in italics to inform the reader that the word is not from English ("The sakura pictures, in particular, caught my eye when I was looking through his photo album.")..
When using several adjectives in a row, you will have to use some commas.
Examples
It was a long, exhausting day.
And then we saw a big, fat, hairy spider!
Exceptions I can think of
Those were the good ol' days. - "good" and "old" are combined into a single adjective here that doesn't quite mean the same the as either of them by themselves
Also note that I think you need to put the more simple adjectives first (which is why I switched yours around) if you want it to sound natural. If you don't want to use commas, you can just use "and" like above.
Hope that helps!
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I went to the park with my son today. Though I took many SAKURA pictures, it was difficult to take a beautiful picture because it was windy today. SAKURA didn't stop, so it was difficult to release the shutter properly. In addition, the composition of a photo is also difficult for me. I would like to study typical good compositions. Thank you so much!
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Taking SAKURA pictures
I went to the park with my son today. Though Although I took many SAKURA pictures, it was difficult to take a beautiful one picture because it was windy today and the SAKURA didn't stop moving, so it was difficult to release the shutter properly. In addition, the composition of a photo is also difficult for me. I would like to study typical good compositions.Thank you so much!
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