A small incident
I got up in the morning with a pretty good mood, but then I received an email from the supervisor of my part-time job in the library. It seemed like, yesterday, when someone returned an adapter, I didn't discharge it successfully, and even worse I placed it in a wrong place. I don't know why, but I got panicked suddenly. I thought I didn't make any mistakes, just as usual, but I doubted myself in light of sometimes I could be careless. I felt bad, and this kind of thing eroded my confidence.
I replied to the email, explained a little, and apologized twice. Then, I was waiting for his reply anxiously. One voice in my head was saying, he would dislike me and not trust me because of this silly mistake. But another voice said, "It's not a big deal, and people always make mistakes. He is a nice person, he will forgive me for the first-time mistake." I don't want to be irrational, but some anxious emotions just seem insurmountable. Only after my supervisor replied, saying it's fine, I sighed with relief completely.
Emotion is intangible, but it can take control of people unexpectedly. I want to be the master of my emotions, but clearly, it's necessary to practice how to address emotions more often!
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A small incident
I got up in the morning in a pretty good mood, but then I received an email from the supervisor of my part-time job in the library. He said that yesterday, when someone returned an adapter, I didn't discharge it successfully, and, even worse, I placed it in a wrong place. I don't know why, but I panicked suddenly. I thought I hadn't made any mistakes, just as usual, but I doubted myself since sometimes I could be careless. I felt bad, and this kind of thing eroded my confidence.I replied to the email, explained a little, and apologized twice. Then, I anxiously waited for his reply. One voice in my head was saying, he would dislike me and not trust me because of this silly mistake. But another voice said, "It's not a big deal, and people always make mistakes. He is a nice person, he will forgive me for the first-time mistake." I don't want to be irrational, but some anxious emotions just seem insurmountable. Only after my supervisor replied, saying it's fine, did I feel completely relieved.
Emotion is intangible, but it can take control of people unexpectedly. I want to be the master of my emotions, but clearly, it's necessary to practice how to address emotions more often!
When talking about mood, we almost always use "in."
I was in a good mood that day.
He's just in a bad mood because he didn't nap today.
Very good job! It is clear that you must speak English pretty regularly, since the sentences are constructed very naturally. Let me know if you have questions and keep up the good work.
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A small incident
I got up in the morning with in a pretty good mood, but then I received an email from the my supervisor of about my part-time job in at the library. It seemed like, yesterday, when someone returned an adapter, I didn't discharge it successfully, and even worse I placed it in a the wrong place. I don't know why, but I got panicked suddenly. I thought I didn't make any mistakes, just as usual, but I doubted myself in light of sometimes I could because sometimes I can be careless. I felt bad, and this kind of thing eroded my confidence.I replied to the email, explained a little, and apologized twice. Then, I was waiting for his reply anxiously. One The voice in my head was saying, he would dislike me and not trust me because of this silly mistake. But another voice said, "It's not a big deal, and people always make mistakes. He is a nice person, he will forgive me for the first-time mistake." I don't want to be irrational, but some anxious emotions just seem insurmountable. Only after my supervisor replied, saying it's fine, I sighed with relief completely.
Emotion is intangible, but it can take control of people unexpectedly. I want to be the master of my emotions, but clearly, it's necessary to practice how to address emotions more often!
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A small incident
I got up in the morning with a pretty good mood, but then I received an email from the supervisor of my part-time job in the library. It seemed like, yesterday, when someone returned an adapter, I didn't discharge it successfully, and even worse I placed it in a wrong place. I don't know why, but I got panicked suddenly. I thought I didn't make any mistakes, just as usual, but I doubted myself in light of sometimes I could be careless. I felt bad, and this kind of thing eroded my confidence.I replied to the email, explained a little, and apologized twice. Then, I was waiting for his reply anxiously. One voice in my head was saying, he would dislike me and not trust me because of this silly mistake. But another voice said, "It's not a big deal, and people always make mistakes. He is a nice person, he will forgive me for the first-time mistake." I don't want to be irrational, but some anxious emotions just seem insurmountable. Only after my supervisor replied, saying it's fine, I sighed with relief completely.
Emotion is intangible, but it can take control of people unexpectedly. I want to be the master of my emotions, but clearly, it's necessary to practice how to address emotions more often!
This is amazing!! The only correction really worth making is "I got up in the morning in a pretty good mood" - not with a good mood.. One is in a good or bad or whatever mood. Well done!
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