Katy second part

When she was 10 years old she became slow and she couldn't climb anymore.
She lived 13 years, in her last year of life I noticed she had a breast tumor, as she was afraid of people plus at her age I decided  not to take her to the vet, she would be so stressed, It would be better take care of her at home.

In mid-July she didn't want to eat, she just drank water, I was terrified because I had two fears, one was watching her die, and the other one was being far from her when the end happened. At least I decided the worst fear was she died alone.

On Sunday she was looking for a dark place, I knew that was the end, I sat down with her and caressed her, she slept, I begged God to take her with him while she was sleeping but that didn't happen..
The next morning I got up decided to take her to the vet to euthanize her. When I saw to her place it had blood, she had a hemorrhage, it was a torture to wait to the vet opened.

While I was driving I was talking to her, telling her how much I loved her, the happiness she had brought to me. Three blocks after arriving at the vet's I heard her breathe loudly.  When we arrived she had passed away.
While I write this, I'm crying because no matter how many years have passed, thinking of her will always make me cry.

Muy bien escrito, ha usado muchas ingles palabras y expresiones avanzado. Felicitaciones.  Pero, como yo en español, comete errores entre presente y pasado.

Si, tu practicaras el pasado más, estarías sorprendida en como fantástico seria tu inglés. ¡Siga trabajando! ¡Estás haciendo bien!