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could you check my english sentences ? 😆😙 It’s a puzzle board. It’s empty in the middle Maybe we need to use it. Is there something to light it on? Lighting on the candle, we put it back to the table. In the fireplace we found a puzzle. There’s a little bit of a light from the fireplace, but still dark to see around the room. There’s a torned diary Maybe “knock knock” would have a meaning Does it happen to be real blood on the diary? Oops, didn’t you surprise? Are you alright? It makes me so surprised it can’t make me surprise The sould is so real What does this flower mean? What’s that torned flower? What’s this flower supposed to mean? We now only have the locker for the piano

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It’s a puzzle board. It’s empty in the middle. 

Maybe we need to use it. Is there some sort of light we can use on it? 

Lighting the candle, we put it back to the table.

In the fireplace we found a puzzle.

There’s a bit of light from the fireplace, but it's still too dark to see around the room.

There’s a torn diary. 

Maybe “knock knock” would have a meaning? 

Could this be real blood on the diary?

Oops, did I scare you? Are you alright?

It really surprised me! 

It can’t suprise me. 

The sound is so real

What does this flower mean?

What’s that torn flower?

What’s this flower supposed to mean? Now we only have the locker for the piano.


Sorry if I changed too much, these sentinces just flow a bit better in English this way. Hope this helps! 

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