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I support this idea about a new restaurant plans to build in our neighborhood. There are several reasons why I like this idea.
First, there will be more competition among local restaurants. Competition is good because this makes the prices go down and besides you have more places where you can choise. For example, I live in a residential area with some restaurants, but lastly local government have changed the use of the area and now there are more restaurants, it is amazing because now I can find affordable prices in restaurants and the best I do not need go out of my neighborhood.
Second, the restaurant will bring new and delicious dishes. The new restaurant will specialize in Peruvian food. I do love Latin American food because they have a variety of dishes and the best it is natural food and not junk food like restaurants here in USA like Mac Donald’s or Kentucky. For example, I remember when I tried “papa a la huancaina” and “lomo saltado” and I felt I can touch the heaven. Besides the new restaurant will prepare Mexican food on weekends. I can not wait to try these dishes.
Third, it will create more opportunities to people do not have a job. Unfortunately, these days more people are unemployed. Even though with this new restaurant they can hire people like cookers, waiters or monitor the place. For example, when I visited Argentina, I saw many local people working in hotels and restaurants like waiters or housekeepers. It is a great opportunity to people so they can be stabilized.
To sum up, I strongly believe that a new restaurant would be a great idea because there will be more competition among local restaurants, the restaurant will bring new and delicious dishes and it will create more opportunities to people do not have a job, so this clearly illustrate the benefits of this great idea.
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I support this idea about a new restaurant plans
to build in our neighborhood. I support the idea of building a
new restaurant in our neighborhood. There are several reasons why I
like this idea.
First, there will be more competition among local restaurants. Competition is good becausethis it makes the prices
go down. and Besides that, you
have more places where you can choise to choose from.
For example, I live in a residential area with some restaurants, but lastly lately the local
government have has changed the use of the area
and now there are more restaurants. It is amazing because now I can find
affordable prices in restaurants, and the best thing is I
do not need go out of "leave" or "go outside
of" my neighborhood.
Second, the restaurant will bring new and delicious dishes. The new restaurant will specialize in Peruvian food. Ido love
Latin American food because they have a variety of dishes, and the
best part is, it is natural food and not junk food like
restaurants here in the USA, like ("for
example" or "such as" works better here, since you already used
"like" earlier in the sentence) McDonald’s or Kentucky Fried
Chicken. For example, I remember when
I tried “papa a la huancaina” and “lomo saltado” and I felt like I can could touch the heaven. Besides In
addition, the new restaurant will prepare Mexican food on weekends.
I cannot wait to try these dishes.
First, there will be more competition among local restaurants. Competition is good because
Second, the restaurant will bring new and delicious dishes. The new restaurant will specialize in Peruvian food. I
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Third, it will create more opportunities to for people that/who do
not have a job. Unfortunately, these days more people are unemployed. Even
though With this new restaurant, they can hire
people like cookers cooks, waiters, or monitor
the place (I'm not sure what you're referring to here).
For example, when I visited Argentina, I saw many local people working in
hotels and restaurants like in roles such as waiters
or housekeepers. It is a great opportunity to for people so
they can be stabilized to become financially stable.
To sum up, I strongly believe that a new
restaurant would be a great idea because there will be more competition among
local restaurants, the restaurant will bring new and delicious dishes, and
it will create more opportunities to for people that/who do
not have a job, so this clearly illustrates the benefits of this
great idea.
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For example, I remember when I tried the dishes “papa a la huancaina” and “lomo saltado”, and I felt I could can touch the heaven. Besides Also, the new restaurant will serve prepare Mexican food on weekends. I can not wait to try these dishes.
Third, it will create more opportunities for to people without do not have a jobs. Unfortunately, these days more people are unemployed. Even though with However, this new restaurant will they can hire people like cookers and waiters or monitor the place. For example, when I visited Argentina, I saw many local people working in hotels and restaurants like waiters or housekeepers. It is a great opportunity to give stability to people so they can be stabilized.
To sum up, I strongly believe that a new restaurant would be a great idea because there will be more competition among local restaurants, the restaurant will bring new and delicious dishes and it will create more opportunities for to people who do not have a jobs. so This clearly illustrates the benefits of this great idea.
Third, it will create more opportunities for to people without do not have a jobs. Unfortunately, these days more people are unemployed. Even though with However, this new restaurant will they can hire people like cookers and waiters or monitor the place. For example, when I visited Argentina, I saw many local people working in hotels and restaurants like waiters or housekeepers. It is a great opportunity to give stability to people so they can be stabilized.
To sum up, I strongly believe that a new restaurant would be a great idea because there will be more competition among local restaurants, the restaurant will bring new and delicious dishes and it will create more opportunities for to people who do not have a jobs. so This clearly illustrates the benefits of this great idea.
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I support this idea about a new restaurant plans to build a new restaurant in our neighborhood. There are several reasons why I like this idea.
Second, the restaurant will bring new and delicious dishes. The new restaurant will specialize in Peruvian food. I do love Latin American food because they have a variety of dishes. Also, the food will be and the best it is natural food and not junk food like restaurants here in USA like McDonald’s or Kentucky Fried Chicken.
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