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a short story FEAR OF LOVE Diana was an affectionate, pretty and beautiful person but she had a very big fear to falling in love. One day she was working when suddenly the phone rang, it was a Facebook “friendship request” notification. That was the beginning of a great lesson for her, his name was Robert, he was a very handsome and he had a nice smile , she looked at his photo, immediately she accepted the request. Robert the boy was a ladies’ man so he was looking for a new victim. The next day Diana was chatting with her mother when a new text message arrived, she checked the message, and it was from Robert. Then she read: ‘Hi Diana, I would like to meet you’, although she didn’t feel confident enough, she accepted, then after that they scheduled a date. She looked nervous because she had never had a date, she was anxious looking for what outfit to wear, but she didn’t know how to impress him. At the end; she decided to wear a beautiful red dress. She looked very attractive. Going back to Robert, he was sleeping, when suddenly his phone rang, it was the alarm clock, but even with this he looked carefree and sleepy, to make the things worse that day he had three dates Margaret, Diana and Sofia. Meanwhile, Diana called Robert incessantly but he didn’t answer, because he was taking a bath, a little later he called her, ‘what’s up?’ he asked, ‘don’t forget our date, please’ she said. To her surprise he hung unexpectedly. At 2 o’clock she arrived at the restaurant, she expected to meet him but he wasn’t there. Fortunately for her, he never arrived, consequently she reflected about it ‘why I did accept the date?’ She wondered. ‘I’m a fool to have believed in him’ she complained herself as a result, she decided not to have any date via internet. All in all she is happy alone, but she is conscious that someday she will fall in love. THE END

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a short story

FEAR OF LOVE

Diana was an affectionate, pretty and beautiful person but she had a very big fear of falling in love. One day while she was working the her phone suddenly rang; it was a Facebook “friendship request” notification.  That was to be the beginning of a difficult lesson for her, His name was Robert, he was handsome and had a nice smile.  Upon seeing his photo she immediately accepted his friend request. Robert, the boy, was a ladies’ man and she later found out that he was looking for a new conquest.

The next day while Diana was chatting with her mother,  a new text message arrived.  She peeked at the message and noticed it was from Robert. She shared with her mother the text which read: ‘Hi Diana, I would like to meet you,'  Although she didn’t feel confident the invitation was genuine she accepted it anyway out of curiosity.  Later that day Robert and Diana scheduled a date.

She looked nervous because she had never had a date. She was anxious rummaging through her closet looking for the perfect  outfit to wear.  She wanted to make a good impression didn’t know how to impress him.   In the end; she decided to wear a beautiful red dress.  She looked in the mirror and confirmed that the red dress made her look very attractive.


While Diana was getting ready Robert was sleeping.  He was suddenly awaken by his phone ringing,  it was his alarm clock which he continued to ignore.  He looked carefree and sleep while he prepared himself for his day which included three separate dates including Margaret, Diana and Sofia.
Meanwhile, Diana had been calling Robert incessantly but he didn’t answer, because he was taking a bath.  A little later he called her,  ‘what’s up?’ he asked, ‘don’t forget our date, please’ she said. He responded "of course I member, see you later' and to her surprise he hung up unexpectedly.

At 2 o’clock she arrived at the restaurant.  She was anxious and excited, expecting him to walk in any moment.  He never arrived.  Consequently she reflected about it ‘why I did accept the date?’ She wondered. ‘I’m a fool to have believed in a complete stranger’ she complained to herself.  As a result, she decided not to attempt another anonymous date request via the internet.  All in all she is happy with herself, but she is certain that someday she will fall in love.

THE END

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