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Describe a difficult situation that you facd in your personal or professional life and explin how you ultimately worked out the problem to your advantage.
My father passed away when I have 18 years old. It was the ultimate difficult situation in my life for several reasons but I had to face it and overcome all the circumstances.
First, I became a more responsible student. I remember I used to go to a lot of parties and the next day I went to the university class very tired and I did not pay attention to my class. Besides, there was many opportunities my friends told me to play football or play station at the same time I had class, for that reasons I did not attend the class. My behavior was prejudicial but I thought it was ok because my father payed and solved everything. Nevertheless, I realized I was wrong after my father died and I started to study hard everyday and I achieved my goal to study abroad.
Second, my brothers and I started to get along. We had a ridiculous fight in our childhood which I even do not remember, but after our father died, we try to spend more time together, even when one of them left the house and went to live alone to other city we continue calling him and visit him once a week. Moreover, now I live alone too, but my brother come to visit me with his wife and we cook on weekend our favorite dish each time we can. I feel very blessed to have them.
Third, I learn to be more independent person. My father payed all our debts but after he passed away, I started to work in my holidays like a waiter and save money for my own expenses. I learned to appreciate more the money and spend it wisely. For example, I stopped to buy clothes and shoes, even I remember I had a jean during 2 years. It was so embarrassing because it was too age-worn. N
In conclusion, I look back and I see I happened hard moments after my father passed away but I overcome each of these situations.
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Describe a difficult situation that you facd in your personal or professional life and explin how you ultimately worked out the problem to your advantage.
My father passed away when I have 18 years old. It was the ultimate difficult situation in my life for several reasons,but I had to face it and overcome all the circumstances.
First, I became a more responsible student. I remember I used to go to a lot of parties and the next day I went to the university class very tired and I did not pay attention to my class. Besides, There was many opportunities my friends told me to play football or To play station at the same time I had class, for that reasons I did not attend the class. My behavior was prejudicial(, but/yet/however/whereas/coz u repeat alot) I thought it was ok because my father payed and solved everything. Nevertheless, I realized I was wrong after my father died and I started(/begin/commence) to study hard everyday and I achieved my goal to study abroad.
Second,My brothers and I started to get along. We had a ridiculous fight in our childhood which I even do not remember, but after our father died, we try to spend more time together, even when one of them left the house and went to live alone to other city we continued calling him and visit him once a week. Moreover, now I live alone too, but my brother come to visit me with his wife and we cook on weekend our favorite dish each time we can. I feel very blessed to have them.
Third, I learn to be more independent person. My father payed all our debts but after he passed away, I started to work in my holidays like a waiter and save money for my own expenses. I learned to appreciate more the money and spend it wisely. For example, I stopped to buy clothes and shoes, even I remember I had a jean during 2 years. It was so embarrassing because it was too age-worn. N
In conclusion, I look back and I see I happened hard moments after my father passed away but I overcome each of these situations.
My father passed away when I have 18 years old. It was the ultimate difficult situation in my life for several reasons,but I had to face it and overcome all the circumstances.
First, I became a more responsible student. I remember I used to go to a lot of parties and the next day I went to the university class very tired and I did not pay attention to my class. Besides, There was many opportunities my friends told me to play football or To play station at the same time I had class, for that reasons I did not attend the class. My behavior was prejudicial(, but/yet/however/whereas/coz u repeat alot) I thought it was ok because my father payed and solved everything. Nevertheless, I realized I was wrong after my father died and I started(/begin/commence) to study hard everyday and I achieved my goal to study abroad.
Second,My brothers and I started to get along. We had a ridiculous fight in our childhood which I even do not remember, but after our father died, we try to spend more time together, even when one of them left the house and went to live alone to other city we continued calling him and visit him once a week. Moreover, now I live alone too, but my brother come to visit me with his wife and we cook on weekend our favorite dish each time we can. I feel very blessed to have them.
Third, I learn to be more independent person. My father payed all our debts but after he passed away, I started to work in my holidays like a waiter and save money for my own expenses. I learned to appreciate more the money and spend it wisely. For example, I stopped to buy clothes and shoes, even I remember I had a jean during 2 years. It was so embarrassing because it was too age-worn. N
In conclusion, I look back and I see I happened hard moments after my father passed away but I overcome each of these situations.
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