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I learned electronics in an engineering school in Vietnam. Thereafter, I went to France because advanced-technology projects flourish and the chocolate tastes better. I had an occasion to work with experienced engineers in CEA for three years and to write one patent and three academic articles in wireless domain. My occupation is essentially to make applications based radio frequency available. Here, I would like to talk about 5G cellular mobile communications, contactless respiratory & cardiac monitoring, tags identifying & tracking, obstacle detection for autonomous cars, etc.
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Self-introduction text
Hello, could you help me to review this self-introduction text ?Thanks !
I learned studied electronics in at an engineering school in Vietnam. Thereafter, I went to France because advanced technology projects flourish there and the chocolate tastes better. I had an occasion the opportunity to work with experienced engineers in CEA for three years, and to write I wrote one patent and three academic articles in the wireless domain. My occupation is essentially Essentially, my job is to make applications based on the radio frequency available. Here, I would like to talk about 5G cellular mobile communications, contactless respiratory & cardiac monitoring, tags identifying & tracking, obstacle detection for autonomous cars, etc.
Note: The last sentence is a little hard for me to correct, because I don't know the context- when you say "Here, I would like to talk about...", where is here? Is this the opening for a speech? Awesome job, nearly perfect!
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Self-introduction text
Hello, could you help me to review this self-introduction text ?Thanks !
I learned electronics in an engineering school in Vietnam. Afterward I went to France, because advanced-technology projects flourish there, and the chocolate tastes better. I had an occasion to work with experienced engineers at the CEA, the French Atomic Energy Commission [?],for three years. While there, I received a patent and wrote three academic articles in the area of wireless electronics [?]. My work is essentially to create applications based on available radio frequencies. In my talk today, I would like to discuss 5G cellular mobile communications, contactless respiratory and cardiac monitoring, identification and tracking tags, obstacle detection for self-driving cars, and more.
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I would just changed learned for studied.
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