The weekend
This weekend it has rained a lot. While it was raining the wind was blowing very strong, so, I haven't been able go out. Yesterday morning, when I woke up the sky was dark and few minutes later, it was raining very strong, I had never see to rain like yesterday.
It was cold and I thought about the people who haven't a house where to stay.
Usually, we all have problems, little or big problems and we are stresses about it, however we don't think about the good things that we have.
I think that could be a good idea to think more about the good thinks and spend less time having negative thinks.
I would like to be always a positive person. Somebody know how get it?
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The weekend
This weekend it has rained a lot. While it was raining the wind was blowing very strong, so, I haven't been able go out. (These two initial sentences are mixing tenses. The first part of the second sentence is written from the perspective that the weekend is past but the first sentence and the last part of the second sentence are written from the perspective that the weekend is still in progress. I suggest: "This weekend it rained a lot. While it was raining the wind was blowing very strong, so I was not able to go out.) Yesterday morning, when I woke up the sky was dark and few minutes later, it was raining very strong hard., I had never see to seen it rain like yesterday.It was cold and I thought about the people who haven't a house where to they can stay.
Usually, we all have problems, little or big problems and we are stresses stressed about it, however we don't think about the good things that we have.
I think that could it would be a good idea to think more about the good thinks things and spend less time having negative thinks thoughts. I would like to be always a positive person. Does anyone Somebody know how to get it do that?
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What you wrote is very understandable. You are doing well. It is hard to learn how to make past tenses work together. I struggled with the imperfect and preterite in Spanish. Keep at it.
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The weekend
This weekend it has *rained a lot. While it was raining the wind was blowing very strong, so I wasn't able go out. Yesterday morning, when I woke up the sky was dark and few minutes later, it was raining very strong, I had never seen ** to ***rain like yesterday.It was cold and I thought about the people who haven't a house where to stay in.
Usually, we all have problems, little or big problems and we are stressed about it, however we don't think about the good things that we have.
I think that could be a good idea to think more about the good things and spend less time having negative things.
I would like to be always a positive person. Somebody know how get it? ****
*The present perfect tense (have done, has done, etc) is not used for past events like the weekend. Simple past tense would work best there. If you want to know when to use the present perfect tense, you might want to search online for a better explanation than what I could give you.
**"see" is present tense. "Had seen" is the correct form for past perfect.
*** To rain is a verb, but just "rain" itself is a noun. The object of the sentence is the physical rain, so you need the noun.
**** I'm not sure what you're trying to say here.
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