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First time to use "italki" Recently, I've got much information about "italki" through my friends, coworker and many advertisements from Youtube. These've interested me in this platform, so today I decided to write down my first essay on this Website as a probation .

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First time using "italki"

Recently, I've got much information about "italki" through my friends I learned about italki from friends, coworkers, and, many advertisements from Youtube Youtube advertisements. These've These have interested me in this platform, so today I decided to write down my first essay on this website as a probation to try it out.



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Recently, I've got much information about "italki" through my friends, coworker and many advertisements from Youtube. These've These have interested me in this platform, so today I decided to write down my first essay on this Website as a probation to try it out.

Notes:
- There isn't a contraction of "these've", although it may sound like that when people speak. 
- The word "probation" isn't typically used like this, it's used mostly for someone who did something wrong or new employees, at least in Am. E.  I suppose you mean something like a trial period.
- Your essay is completely understandable so I think it's a great first effort! 

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也感謝您的鼓勵
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謝謝您向他們道謝了。 繼續加油。
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歡迎您來到這個網站。 只想給一個溫馨的提醒,最好向給您批改的作文表示感謝。西方人很注重這個道理。 也許您想閱讀這個鏈接https://www.italki.com/discussion/201704 有些英語母語者對不懂道謝的會友表示抱怨。

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