English correction My feeling is that: The breaker could be smaller. Color emission of the PPMs should be more obvious. Stability of the powder should be shown(Maybe add PPMs to boiling water environm

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English correction My feeling is that: The breaker could be smaller. Color emission of the PPMs should be more obvious. Stability of the powder should be shown(Maybe add PPMs to boiling water environment?)

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