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Technical problems in class
There's something wrong with the speakers in room 1 and the speakers in room 2. Whenever I play music or play a video in room 1, people in the room next door (room 2) can hear it very loudly as if my computer was connected to the speakers in the room next door . it's annoying sometimes because you know, the teacher next door usually comes into your class to ask you to turn the volume down. But the thing here is I I don't play the music very loudly I just play it loud enough for my students to enjoy it. If I turn the volume down, the music sounds very quiet. What's the point of playing music at a very low volume? Most of my games or activities in my class require music,too. It makes my class more lively and it also makes my lesson more interesting. I'm not sure if the problem is from the speakers or just because the walls between the two rooms haven't been well-soundproofed. Please find out and get it fixed. Thanks.
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Technical problems in class
There's something wrong with the speakers in rooms 1 and 2. Whenever I play music or a video in my classroom (room 1), the people in the room next door (room 2) can hear it very loudly, as if my computer were connected to the speakers in the room next door. It's annoying because, as you know, the teacher next door usually comes into your class to ask you to turn the volume down. But the thing here is that I don't play the music very loudly; I play it just loud enough for my students to enjoy. If I turn the volume down, the music is too quiet. What's the point of playing music that no one can hear? Most of the games and activities in my class require music. It makes the class more lively and the lesson more interesting. I'm not sure if the problem is with the speakers or is just that the walls between the two rooms haven't been well-soundproofed. Please find out and get it fixed. Thanks.("as if my computer were connected.." is a usage of the English subjunctive. It may sound strange, but it is correct. In fact, many native English speakers misuse - or don't use - the subjunctive.)
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Technical problems in class: there is something glinchs with the speakers in room number 1 and the speakers in room number 2, Whenever I play music or play a video in room 1, people in the room next door (room 2) can hear it very loudly as if my computer is connected to the speakers in the room next door . it's annoying sometimes because you know, the teacher next door usually comes into your class number 1 and asks you to turn the volume down. But the issue is that I don't play the music very loudly, I just play it loud enough for my students to enjoy it. If I turn the volume down, the music sounds very quiet. What's the point of playing music at a very low volume? Most of my games or activities in my class require music,too. It makes my class more lively and it also makes my lesson more interesting. I'm not sure if the problem is from the speakers or just because the walls between the two rooms haven't been well-soundproofed. Please find out the solution and get it fixed. Thanks in advance
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