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Could someone correct my writing please? "What animal are you?" Animals have their own unique personality and some of them may mirror human personality traits. In today's post I'll associate a few animals with my friend Tom. When I think of Tom, the first animal that comes to my mind is a dog, because I can always count on him when I need something. The dogs are loyal and dependable. He can also be an elephant. They can detect when one is stressed out. Often, when I was upset, he would always ask me if I'm alright. Tom has been learning Polish for a long time and that's a challenge since it isn't the easiest language to learn. So in this field, he definitely would be a bear. Bears tolerate challenges better than others. Tom loves reading books and talks about interesting topics with me and that makes him an owl. And what quality of animals is comparable with your character? Write in the comments!

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Could someone correct my writing please?

"What animal are you?"

Animals have their own unique personality and some of them may mirror human personality traits. In today's post I'll associate a few animals with my friend Tom.

When I think of Tom, the first animal that comes to my mind is a the dog, because I can always count on him when I need something. The Dogs are loyal and dependable.

He can/could also be an elephant. They can detect when one is stressed out. Often, when I was  am upset, he would always ask me if I'm alright.

Tom has been learning Polish for a long time and that's a challenge since it isn't the easiest language to learn. So in this field vein, he definitely would be a bear. Bears tolerate challenges better than other animals.

Tom loves reading books and talks about/ discusses  interesting topics with me, and that makes him an owl.

And What quality of animals is comparable with your character? Write in the comments!


Interesting article!  

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Could someone correct my writing please?

"What animal are you?"

Animals have their own unique personality and some of them may mirror human personality traits. In today's post I'll associate a few animals with my friend Tom.

When I think of Tom, the first animal that comes to my mind is a dog, because I can always count on him when I need something. The dogs are loyal and dependable.

He can also be an elephant. They can detect when one is stressed out. Often, when I was am upset, he would always asks me if I'm alright.

Tom has been learning Polish for a long time and that's a challenge since it isn't the easiest language to learn. So in this field, he definitely would be a bear. Bears tolerate challenges better than others.

Tom loves reading books and talks about interesting topics with me and that makes him an owl.

And what quality of animals is comparable with your character? Write in the comments!


Very well done!!

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"Often, when I was upset, he would always ask me if I'm alright. " I would change the tense to be consistent with the rest of the piece. In the same section, often and always can't be used together. Otherwise, I think there's no problem. "when I have been upset, he has always asked me if I'm alright. "

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