The Internet in our lives.
The internet is really important thing in community. A lot of people always use social network for communicate, business or other things. We became addicted to the Internet. We can't not use our phones or computers. We do it every day.
And I think it's sad. For most people, it's important that their photos and posts are liked, commented on, or viewed. But most often what we see on other people's pages is not true. It's information to attract attention.
Are these our values? Why are teens so addicted? I think their parents should show them the other side of life. Other hobbies and activites. Around so much more wonderful things!
For example, a books. When I read I imagine all the pieces that come together in a complete picture. This is the other world which we don't know. Isn't that fascinating?
So, I think we should spend less time on the Internet. I sure that life will definitely change.
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The Internet in our lives.
The internet is a really important thing in communityies. A lot of people always use social network for to communicate, for business or among other things. We became have become addicted to the Internet. We can't not (you cannot use double negatives in English.) constantly use our phones or computers. We do it every day.And I think it's sad. For most people, it's important that their photos and posts are liked, commented on, or viewed. But most often what we see on other people's pages is not true. It's information to attract attention.
Are these our values? Why are teens so addicted? I think their parents should show them the other side of life. Other hobbies and activites. Around so much There are so many more wonderful things around!
For example, a books. When I read I imagine all the pieces that come together in a complete picture. Thisere areis the other worlds whichthat we don't know. Isn't that fascinating?
So, I think we should spend less time on the Internet. I am sure that life would will definitely change.
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The Internet in our lives.
The Internet is a really important thing in the community. A lot of people always use social network to communicate, for business or other things. We became addicted to the Internet. We can't not use our phones or computers. We do it every day.And I think it's sad. For most people, it's important that their photos and posts are liked, commented on, or viewed. But most often what we see on other people's pages is not true. It's information to attract attention.
Are these our values? Why are teens so addicted? I think their parents should show them the other side of life. Other hobbies and activities. There are so much many more wonderful things around!
For example, a books. When I read I imagine all the pieces that coming together in a complete picture. This is another world which we don't know. Isn't that fascinating?
So, I think we should spend less time on the Internet. I'm sure that life will definitely change.
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