Bad day today
I feel so bad today,because my older sister shouted at me. Sometimes i know she wants me to be better, but i really don't like being compared with others. Everyone is special and is of his own personality, i just want to be myself. I don't care about how much money they can make or how much progess they make. I have my own pace of life and plans, i don't want to be pushed or pulled.
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Bad day today
I feel so bad today, because my older sister shouted (Synonym: yelled) at me. Sometimes I know she wants me to be better, but I really don't like being compared with others. Everyone is special, and is has of his has their own personality, I just want to be myself. I don't care about how much money they can make or how much progess progress they make. I have my own pace of in life and have my own plans,Ii don't want to be pushed or pulled.0
Bad day today
I feel so bad today because my older sister shouted at me. Sometimes I know she wants me to be better, but I really don't like being compared with others. Everyone is special and has his or her own personality; I just want to be myself. I don't care about how much money they can make or how much progress they make. I have my own pace of life and plans; I don't want to be pushed or pulled.0
Bad day today
I feel so bad today, because my older sister shouted at me. Sometimes I know she wants me to be expects me to do better*, but I really don't like being compared with others. Everyone is special and is of has his own personality, so I just want to be myself. I don't care about how much money they can make or how much progress they make. I have my own pace of life and plans, I don't want to be pushed or pulled.Tippi, keep on doing the best for YOU. Not for anyone else. Your essay is very clear, and the English is correct. One important punctuation reminder: 我 is important, so always capitalize "I." Four times you spelled it with a lower-case "i" which is wrong.
You used a lot of really good English expressions. Everything sounded very natural.
* "She wants me to be better" isn't very natural. A few alternatives: "she expects me to do better" or "she expects more of me."
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Sounds great. Good luck.
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I feel so upset today,because my older sister shouted at me. Sometimes i know she anticipate me to be better, but i really don't like be compared with others. Everyone is special manner and i just want to be myself. I don't care about how much money they can make or how much improvement they make. I have my own goals in my life and plans, i not only want to be judged by others, but also do not need someone to tell me about my plan
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