30 Day Creative Writing Challenge

I was reading the discussions tab and I found someone posting pretty interesting challenges for language learners.
So here we go...

Day 1
*Take us through a written walk down your street and to your favorite place through the eyes of somebody else.



Finally, Tuesday has arrived!  I'm excited because I have been working so hard all the week long, since my last class, to figure out those new scales. Studying music has never come easy for me.  It requires passion and dedication to achieve mastery.  Those new scales are so tricky, but so cool, I truly feel like I'm playing.  If I didn't love it so much I'm sure that I would have quit already.
Trust, you have to have trust in your teacher and in the technique.  That's my recommendation to anyone taking classes and I really trust my teacher and his lessons.  One day I hope to play like him!

I take classes in person and it takes me about one hour to reach his place.  I don't mind, I use the time to review my previous session and I just love going there.  For many reasons I wish I could live in his neighborhood.  People are kind and it seems to be a very peaceful place, perfect for studying.  Every week I walk through the street full of trees, birds singing, and the beautiful gardens.  The place smells pure like nature.  Before I leave I take in the scenery and draw a deep breath of pure air which makes for a moment of joyful street therapy for  week ahead.  The experience of taking music lessons in these surroundings is like being reborn.  I always return to the city feeling better than I was.  In my opinion, there's nothing like the visiting the countryside!


That's it for today, I would really appreciate any corrections. Thank you!

30 Day Creative Writing Challenge

I was reading the discussions tab and I found someone posting some pretty interesting challenges for language learners.
So here we go...

Day 1
*Take us through a written walk down your street and to your favorite place through the eyes of somebody else.



"Finally Tuesday has arrived, I'm** so excited because I have** been working so hard all the week long, since my last class, to figure out those new scales. Studying music has never been easy. It requires such a passionate dedication to master/to perfect achieve the mastery, and those scales are so tricky but so cool. Damn, if I didn't** love it that so much I'm sure I wouldn't have made it this far sure I would be quit so far .
Trust is the word. That's how it feels taking these classes and I really trust my teacher and his lessons. Man, I wish I could play like him!

Taking classes in person takes me about one hour to reach his place I actually go in person to his classes and it takes me roughly/about one hour to get there. But I don't mind, I just love going there.
I wish I could live in that neighborhood. The people there are so kind gentle, it really is a peaceful place to be/to live its a really peaceful place. Perfect for studying.
Every week walking through this street full of trees, birds singing, beautiful gardens, smells like nature. A joyful therapy for my stressful week. A relaxing feeling like growing as a human being, always going back better than I was. There's nothing like the countryside."


That's it for today, I would really appreciate any corrections. Thank you!

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**When using apostrophes for contractions i.e. "I'm" always try to keep it consistent and don't say "I'm" then "I have" instead of "I've"