My Neighborhood (Could you correct it please) I was born in Al-Muadhafin neighborhood. I lived there for five years. My house there was not very large and it was near to my friend's house. We enjoyed

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Layla Ra'ad

My Neighborhood (Could you correct it please) I was born in Al-Muadhafin neighborhood. I lived there for five years. My house there was not very large and it was near to my friend's house. We enjoyed the time that we spent together. Our neighbors was very annoying the didn't give us the freedom to play outside. Whenever we want to play near to their house the starts shouting of us. We couldn't play outside because of them. After that, we moved to another neighborhood and to another home. It was larger than the previous one,but I felt very sad because I left my friend. After few months I had new friends. We were playing outside freely and our neighbors were very kind. My friend's and I used to play in my garden. And at night we spent the time with one of our friend's house. Our relationships with their families was very beautiful. We had taken lots of photos and I kept all them with me. I My friend that she lives in the previous neighborhood used to visit me every weekend. It was really beautiful moments.

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My Neighborhood (Could you correct it please)

I was born in Al-Muadhafin neighborhood. I lived there for five years. My house there was not very large and it was near to my friend's house. We enjoyed the time that we spent together. Our neighbors was were very annoying the they didn't give us the freedom to play outside. Whenever we want wanted to play near to their house, the they starts would start shouting of us. We couldn't play outside because of them. After that, we moved to another neighborhood and to into another home. It was larger than the previous one,but I felt very sad because I left my friend. After a few months I had new friends. We were playing outside freely and our neighbors were very kind. My friend's and I used to play in my garden. And , and at night we spent the time with at one of our friend's house. Our relationships with their families was very beautiful. (The sentence just sounds off. Maybe 'we were really good friends with their families.') We had taken lots of photos and I kept all them all with me. I My friend that she lives in the previous neighborhood used to visit me every weekend. It was really beautiful moments. They are such beautiful memories.

I'm assumed you're learning American English, so I left the word 'neighbor' as it was'

This is really good, but just watch your tenses.

I was born in Al-Muadhafin, my neighborhood. I lived there for five years. My house was not very large and it was near to my friend's house. We enjoyed the time that we spent together. Our neighbors were very annoying, they didn't give us the freedom to play outside. Whenever we want to play near to their house they started shouting us. We couldn't play outside because of them. After that, we moved to another neighborhood. There, the house was larger than the previous one,but I felt very sad because I left my friend. After few months I had new friends. We played outside freely and our neighbors were very kind. My friends and I used to play in my garden. At night, we spent the time in one of our friend's house. Our relationship with their families was very beautiful. We had taken lots of photos and I kept all them with me. My friend, who lives in the previous neighborhood, used to visit me every weekend. They were really beautiful moments.

I was born in Al-Muadhafin neighborhood. I lived there for five years. My house there was not very large and it was near my friend's house. We enjoyed the time that we spent together. Our neighbors were very annoying, they didn't give us the freedom to play outside. Whenever we wanted to play near their house they started shouting of us. We couldn't play outside because of them. After that, we moved to another neighborhood and to another home. It was larger than the previous one,but I felt very sad because I left my friend. After a few months I had new friends. We were playing outside freely and our neighbors were very kind. My friends and I used to play in my garden. And at night we spent our time at one of our friend's house. Our relationships with their families was very beautiful. We had taken lots of photos and I kept all of them with me. My friend that lives in the previous neighborhood used to visit me every weekend. It was really beautiful moments.

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