A few sentences. Are there any mistakes?
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The first painter was very self-confident. He stood right, speak loodly and liked joking. The second painter was completely different from the first one. Not that he was very not sure of him. He knews that he got talent. But he didn't like to promote himself and he didn't know how to do it.
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A few sentences. Are there any mistakes?
Below a description from a book I'm reading.The first painter was very self-confident. He stood tall, spoke loudly, and enjoyed joking around. The second painter was completely different from the first; he was not very sure of himself. He knew that he had talent, but he didn't like promoting himself. To be honest, he really didn't even know how.
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The first painter was very self-confident. He stood right, speak loodly loudly and liked joking. The second painter was completely different from the first one. Not that he was very not sure of him. It wasn't that he was unsure of himself/it wasn't that he lacked confidence. He knews that he got had talent, but he didn't like to promote himself promoting his work and he didn't know how to do it.
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