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90th day 2019 (Describing picture Frankfurt-on-Main) I took this photo when I was in Frankfurt-on-Main in twenty eleven. In the foreground of the photo, you can see two women. In the background of the picture, there is a shop. You can also see some other people around the shop. The women walking along the street are definitely Asian. They don’t carry any bag, but the woman with glasses has a camera. So I can say they are not shopping, they are just sightseeing. The man on the left is probably don’t like the ice-cream he is eating, and going to throw it to a trash basket. In the right of the photo the woman in red is probably a shop assistant. She is selling some clothing outside. If you look attentively in the right edge of the picture, you can see a couple of people with bags. They are definitely shopping. The man might be drinking a coffee. I could also say something about the motorbike, but I can’t think of any story. Perhaps somebody parked it here to go shopping, or the owner of it is a shop-assistant in the shop. Anyway, it looks nice and makes this photo look more interesting.

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I took this photo when I was in Frankfurt-on-Main in 2011. In the foreground of the photo, you can see there are two women. In the background of the picture there is a shop. You can also see some other people around the shop. The women walking along the street are definitely Asian. They aren't carrying any bags, but the woman with glasses has a camera. So we can say they are not shopping, they are just sightseeing. The man on the left is probably doesn’t like the ice-cream he is eating, and is about to throw it in a bin. To the right of the photo, the woman in red is probably a shop assistant. She is selling some clothing outside. If you look closely at the righthand side of the picture, you can see a couple of people with bags. They are definitely shopping. The man might be drinking a coffee. I could also say something about the motorbike, but I can’t think of a story. Perhaps somebody parked it here to go shopping, or the owner of it is an shop-assistant in the shop. Anyway, it looks nice and makes this photo look more interesting.
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Not everything I have edited in my correction is necessarily wrong, but i have tried to make the English more natural

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