Appearance

I can recognize myself while seeing me in the mirror but I'm not sure that the person in the reflection is the person I am.

* while looking at myself, when I see myself
Consider: changing the first myself -> my face to avoid the repetition (I can recognize myself when I see myself in the mirror -> I can recognize my face when I see myself in the mirror).

If I had never seen myself, I would have drawn myself differently.

"Consider: pictured, imagined

I think I would be thin, red-haired with charismatics face traits.

*facial features

I would inspire respect by  with my strong personality.

*command respect

I would have a great look and an airy walk.

In fact, I have a very common look, I'm fat and round-shouldered.

* Consider: In reality,   The truth is...,

I have less problem about my appearance in itself than the fact that it doesn't match my personality.

Only my friends really know me. People have to look deeper into my personality to understand who I am.

* And that's great, right?  ☺️