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Ya Wen
I Love Dancing, Dance Is My Life. ‘Before the age of 30, dance is my whole world; After the age of 30, I share dance with the whole world.’ If I have to use one sentence to describe my life in my early 20s, I would say ‘contributing my sincere passion to dance without rare of distraction.’ I have started my lifelong passion for dance since I was three years old. At the age of 13, under the support of my parents, I was sent to a formal dance school to perceive professional dance training. During the time, I have never lost my interests in dance, on the contrary, I have taken the path of becoming a profession in dance more and more seriously. to be continued...

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I Love Dancing: it Is My Life.

Before the age of 30, dancing is was my whole world.  After the age of 30, I shared dancing with the whole world. 

If I have to use one sentence to describe my life in my early 20s, I would say ‘contributing my sincere passion to dance without rare of any distractions.’

I have started my lifelong passion for dance since when I was three years old.  At the age of 13, under  with the support of my parents, I was sent to a formal dance school to perceive receive professional dance training. During this time, I have never lost my interest in dance and on the contrary, in fact, I have taken the path of becoming a professional dancer in dance more and more seriously.

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Well written Ya Wen. I just made a few changes to make it flow more naturally. I look forward to the next essay.

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