English Academy advertisement
Judith goes across the street when she sees the propaganda of the new language school in the City. The sign says "learn as children but without childishness"Thomas chewing gum approaches towards it.
Thomas: Still wanting to learn French?
Judith: yes ... you're never too old
Thomas: my friend the postman Gonzalo goes to that academy. If you want, I can ask him how good it is?
Judith writes down the Academy's contact number.
Judith: Well, I'll still call today to see the packages They have
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English Academy advertisement
Judith goes across the street when she sees the advertisement of the new language school in the city. The sign says "learn like children do, but without the childishness" Chewing gum, Thomas approaches towards it.Thomas: Still wanting to learn French?
Judith: yes ... you're never too old.
Thomas: my friend Gonzalo, the postman, goes to that academy. If you want, I can ask him how good it is?
Judith writes down the academy's contact number.
Judith: Well, I'll call today anyway to see what packages they have.
Excellent!
I changed "propaganda" to advertisement because propaganda has very negative connotations, like brainwashing.
You can't use approach and towards together because they mean the same thing. "Thomas approaches it" = "Thomas moves towards it."
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English Academy advertisement
Judith goes across the street when she sees the propaganda of an advert for the a new language school in the City. The sign says "learn as like children do, without the childishness". Thomas, chewing gum, approaches the ad towards it.Thomas: Still wanting to learn French?
Judith: yes ... you're never too old
Thomas: my friend the postman Gonzalo goes to that academy school. If you want, I can ask him how good it is?
Judith writes down the Academy's contact number.
Judith: Well, I'll still call today to see the packages what courses They have
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