The Real Dance
Real Dance
A person who is passionate to dance is the one who would dance freely and fearlessly without worrying about other’s view, this is the real dance. In soul dance, you don’t dance for others, but only dance for yourself, furthermore, you dance without needs to say why.
Honestly speaking, dance is merely a tool of assisting you to dance internally. When you reach the moment of staying in deep silence while dancing, the outside world would never exist and nothing is important anymore.
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Thanks to my Super Tutor Antony B corrected my writing! ^^
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The Real Dance
A person who is passionate for dance is one who dances freely and fearlessly without worrying about other’s opinions; this is the real dance.
In soul dance, you don’t dance for others, but only for yourself, and you don’t have to have any reason for dancing in the first place.
Honestly speaking, dance is merely a way to express yourself and be introspective. When you reach a state of pure tranquility, the outside world fades away, and nothing else matters.
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The Real Dance
Real DanceA person Someone who is passionate to dance about dancing is the one who would should * dance freely and fearlessly without worrying about what other’s view think; this is the real dance. In soul dance** of the soul, you don’t dance for others, but only dance for yourself. Furthermore, you dance without the needs to say explain why.
Honestly speaking, dance is merely a tool of assisting you to dance internally. When you reach the moment of staying in deep silence while dancing, the outside world would never exist and nothing is important anymore.
Ya Wen, this is nice. Your writing about the experience of ecstasy through dance. This way, dance becomes a religious experience, an act of holiness. I like this idea.
* Your wording was good. I made the changes in this sentence to make it more natural.
** "Soul dance" - I think "soulful dance" or "dance of the soul" is more natural. Otherwise, you should define the expression "soul dance" so that we understand what it means.
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Thanks to my Super Tutor Antony B corrected my writing! ^^
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The Real Dance
A person who is passionate for dance is one who dances freely and fearlessly without worrying about other’s opinions; this is the real dance.
In soul dance, you don’t dance for others, but only for yourself, and you don’t have to have any reason for dancing in the first place.
Honestly speaking, dance is merely a way to express yourself and be introspective. When you reach a state of pure tranquility, the outside world fades away, and nothing else matters.
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