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My daily life 9 I think writing an essay here is like writing a public diary. I will write some of my daily thoughts and things in my life, not just for writing. And this process has improved my English, why not? I spend about 20-40 minutes a day writing, including the time for thinking ideas and expressions. As a non-native English speaker, I want to make my essay more readable, so that it can be fun when others help me to modify it. But this is not easy. I don't know if you have heard a sentence called “Thousands of Beautiful appearances are all similar, but a hilarious mind is one in a million. (好看的皮囊千篇一律,有趣的灵魂万里挑一)" Sometimes the hilarious mind is the reason why friends or lovers can get along with each other. But being hilarious doesn't mean being funny or ridiculous. On the contrary, I find it to build on a wealth knowledge and experience. I occasionally feel that I am a boring person, especially when I don't know what to write, but I also tell myself that I should accept imperfect self.

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My daily life 9

I think writing an essay here is like writing a public diary. I will write some of my daily thoughts and things in my life, not just for (the sake of) writing. And this process has improved my English, why not? I spend about 20-40 minutes a day writing, including the time for thinking of ideas and expressions. As a non-native English speaker, I want to make my essay more readable, so that it can be fun when others help me to modify it. But this is not easy.

I don't know if you have heard a sentence called of the saying, “Thousands of Beautiful appearances are all similar, but a hilarious mind is one in a million. (好看的皮囊千篇一律,有趣的灵魂万里挑一)" Sometimes the hilarious mind is the reason why friends or lovers can get along with each other. But being hilarious doesn't mean being funny or ridiculous. On the contrary, I find it to build on a wealth knowledge and experience. I occasionally feel that I am a boring person, especially when I don't know what to write (or when I can't think of what to write) , but I also tell myself that I should accept my imperfect self.

Hardly any mistakes so these are merely suggestions. It is really not easy to think up, write and publish entries on a regular basis let alone in your 2nd language. Hats off to all of you who are able to do it. ("hats off" is an expression of congratulations) 

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Perfect ! I didn't find any mistake ! good job keep on going

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