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Ben Franklin learned the martial arts as an apprentice to Bruce Liu, His father want him to be a carpenters, but he has little aptitude in learning it, he doesn't have the same dexterity as a master craftsman,He was so depressed.one day, he saw someone practicing martial arts in a park, he was so attracted by it, the man practice the martial arts adroitly, obviously, he is an ambidextrous person .then Ben Franklin determined to study the martial arts ,He want to be a versatile person 、Finally, he became an apprentice to the man named Bruce Liu
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Ben Franklin learned the martial arts as an apprentice to of Bruce Liu. His father want wanted him to be a carpenters, but he has had little aptitude in learning it. He doesn't didn't have the same dexterity as a master craftsman "I don't think your sentence is grammatically wrong but 'He didn't have the dexterity of a master craftsman' sounds better to me." He was so depressed. One day, he saw someone practicing martial arts in a park. He was so attracted by it.
The man practicedthe martial arts adroitly/gracefully. He was obviously an ambidextrous person. Ben Franklin was then determined to study the martial arts. He wanted to be a versatile person. Finally In the end, he became an apprentice to of the man named Bruce Liu.
The man practiced
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Ben Franklin learned the martial arts as an apprentice to ofBruce Liu, His father wanted him to be a carpenters, but he has little aptitude in learning it(I can´t tell if you are talking about attitude or skillfulness, so: he didn´t have the right attitude or he wasn´t very skilled), he doesn't didn´t have the same dexterity as a master craftsman, He was so depressed one day,One day when he was very depressed, he saw someone practicing martial arts in a park, and he was so attracted by it, the man practiced the martial arts adroitly, obviously he is was an ambidextrous person .so Then Ben Franklin determined decided to study the martial arts ,He wanted to be a versatile person 、Finally, he became an apprentice to of the man named Bruce LiuHi Sara, I made some small corrections, but the text is quite clear!
Just don´t forget to use the past tense to talk about events that took place in the past.
Cheers! :)
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